What Do You Mean All Dungeons Are Girls!!!?
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A boy wakes up in a mysterious black space, with a goddess who reincarnates him as a demonic dungeon. There’s just one catch, in this world dungeons are girls, and then when he finally unlocks his avatar he discovers, it is a cute loli demon and while he or rather she is dealing with her new found gender issues the church comes calling.
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- Status
- Cancelled
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- J Country
Royal Road Stats
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- 3.9/ 5.0
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Chapters(9 total)
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- SpiralBakaRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Spoiler: Spoiler
Title: What Do You Mean All Dungeons Are Girls?
Genre: Fantasy, Comedy.
Protagonist: A guy that choose to be a dungeon because the other choice is a succubus. better be a rock than be a girl.
Setting: a fantasy world with levels, skills, magic, dungeons, and gods.
Tension Level: mid.
Basic Premise: the guy died on earth and was reincarnated as a dungeon. his dungeon is a lust dungeon filled with more aphrodisiac the deeper you went. also, since he didn't want to see naked men when they died and transported to his entrance, he choose a perk to make them girls when they died.
Chapter Content: how the guy has to deal with being reincarnated as a girl, how the world deals with a lust dungeon that has the curse of lost manhood, how some people get captured. how another tried to capture it instead.
Chapter Reached: 21
Personal Opinion: funny. it's funny. like how a harem party got the guy changed to a girl. or some a guy that stabs his party members for having sex in the dungeon, etc. usually, I hate evil mcs, but this is kind of ambiguous. I like it.
oops, I forgot that dungeon are girls. change the pronouns refererring to the dungeons to a more feminine ones. - superdbgtfanRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Some areas lack the depth I expected but good.
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Grammar is not the best, bordering on being under average for this website. That's saying something, and it is not good at all. I would go on to say that I honestly couldn't enjoy this for what it was.
Sure, the idea was fine enough. Not something that you can base a entire series on but maybe a short novella or something. And with the length put out here, I guess it comes within that boundary. According to the author, the rest is on another website. I will not be going through the effort of finding it. 3.5/5 - NightOps 007Royal Road★★★★ 3.5Not terrible for a first. Lacks a solid direction for building up on, but advances from plot to plot easily and isn't quite disconnected from one development to the next. I have seen improvements as you've been writing more. Keep up the good work, your effort is showing.
Style: Having fun seems to be the main theme. No need to get too serious or technical. Fighting sequences could use some TLC.
Story: Advances quickly and things spiral out of the MC control at every turn, only to be saved at the last moment by some inexplicable event. Spoiler: The final boss just showed up to solve one little problem for her. Is the story ending soon?
Grammar: I've done some editing for the author. Flows well enough to be easily understood, but could use some work.
Character: Fairly descriptive with the characters. Establishes personalities and appearances well. MC and maybe some others are perhaps too quick to change. Spoiler: MC went from being sullen mess from being bent to being fine with having kids way too fast and easily. - BowmanWRoyal Road★★★ 2.5I'm not going to bother writing much because there isn't much to write about. 23 chapters in and I am only continuing on because I haven't got much else to read. This novel is no piece of art, nor is it a pile of dung, it's just a below, below average time killer.
The reason why I have rated this novel so low, is because it just lacks, well, almost everything. The most important being the fact that nothing is described very well, some descriptions of scenes are incredibly painful to read. The action scenes are lower in quality than about a good 98% of the novels on this site.
The only description we get is "Idiot A deals 400 physical damage! Lesser Beastkin Demon loses shield, 420/820. Rinse and repeat. Demon dies!" Idiot A wipes off his sweat then begins to attack again "Idiot A deals 400 physical damage! Lesser Loli loses 400 health! Rinse and repeat Demon dies" Idiot A is currently fighting off the pheromones, he wants to get under the sheets with a woman, he attacks another demon!
Anything other than the fighting scenes are at least slightly better, but that is not saying much.
This novel also contains large jumps in logic, for example:
Spoiler: Spoiler
a 'former SS ranked adventurer' has terrible house security that can be broken by C ranked adventurers. He doesn't find out and also has no way of knowing who the culprits are. A ranked adventurers are apparently able to apply for the job of Royal Court Mage of a kingdom, yet this former SS ranked adventurer has security only slightly better than ol' granny next door.
The novel also likes to skip content that shouldn't really be skipped, I feel as if I'm reading a diary at times.
The antagonists have literally zero motivation beyond wanting to get more 'playthings' and to 'control the dungeon', this isn't even a spoiler because the first time we are introduced to the church, they are instantly revealed to be massive wall stains thinking only with their lower organs. Which is nothing new of course, but this novel - CrimjawRoyal Road★★ 2.0This reveiw is based mostly on personal perference but that doesn't mean its much better. I feel as if it's just and excuse to write some Yuri basically. Cause females are the only ones that are (more) likeable characters and the males are lackluster. The MC is unrelatable and seems to be invincible, they doesn't seem to generally care about (or don't express) much care for their pets/playthings (do you feel concern for playthings). Action, just read the other reviews.
- BeyogiRoyal Road★★ 2.0Normally I like gender bender stories and dungeon stories, but this one left me thoroughly unimpressed.
Basically the MC wins at everything forever, the adventurers don't have a chance and when they do have a chance they get fucked over by random divine interventions. The author is throwing around literal Deus Ex Machinas.
There isn't much dungeon building at all. The story is mostly about adventurers getting fucked over by gods. Apart from that there's this weirdly extensive litRPG combat display which disrupts the story flow.