Void shifter

Self-Published

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Description

May contain horror elements.

Jacob is a servant to the church of life, spirit and mind. But on his 8th birthday, this changes when he tears out the heart of his father figure when he was forced to play reserve dress up.Becoming something he is taught to hate he leaves the church as he decides to fuck it, I may as well open the gates of hell and have some fun on the way.The MC's metal development in unique due to specified circumstances so he will rarely act like an 8-year-old, and he is slightly sociopathic.This is my first ever story so criticism would be great. I also have heavy dyslexia along with some other metal 'uniqueness' so this whole story is a big F you to it but I am sorry for any and all inevitable mistakes.(I don't own the cover photo. If the original owner wants me to take it down, private message me and I will)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: TallDwarf

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 130
Views: 70,577

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Community Reviews(6)

War_X_LordRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i have been trying to find a good story for days and i have several standards to search :
1 the prolog has to be clear and understandable (a lot of stories fail at this point) .
2 the story concept is original (or i haven't seen it before).
3 character names are not difficult to remember and there's a "few" of them (i read a couple of stories which had more then 25 names that i had to remember from the first arc and they're all important to the plot).
4 the story is easy to follow.
5 no massive info dumps or constant normal ones (i'am reading to have fun not to suffer).
6 NO HAREM (i like to read a good story not about a dude nailing girls).
And until now i haven't seen anything bad in this story it is fun to read,
I Would like to write more but it's 3:00am, and sorry for any mistake,
just to summarize it : it's a good story.
Haroune601Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like it ; mc has interesting powers ,he is ruthless but has emotions and is very intelligent .
Jack BlankRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I just straight up liked it. A story that didn't take itself too seriously but was well put together enough for me to enjoy it, grammar be damned.
It was just something I liked. It was good enough for me to enjoy and I'd gladly recommend it.
FrostPrismRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Besides the use of wrong or missing words every once in awhile and the pacing of the story its pretty solid. I would recomend the author slow down on what is happening to the MC but other than that I like it and will continue to read and would recomend other to test it out.
Josh_WilliamsRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's too early for me to review since I'm only at chapter 6, however if I forget about this review/ don't review it at the end then this will have to do. First of all, yes, there are some grammer errors, but that doesn't make it too hard to read or anything, For me it's excusable. Now onto my main point... What the fuck is this sludge?? where the fuck did it come from???? All we know is that hes about to get raped and he gets put under a magic mindrape spell and then BOOP he has the sludge? I might have missed something but... it doesn't make sense, where does he get it from?
Edit: The start was very awkward with bad flow but by the end I was actually disappointed that it ended. Also the start was confusing since the sludge appeared out of nowhere without context before hand but later was explained. In my opinion overall a good novel
Imperator NoctisRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
the concept of the story and progression is decent. However the grammar and lack of sentence structure lets it down. With a good editor this story has a lot of potential however at the moment if has a long way to go.