Unyielding
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A hapless factory worker's daily commute through a ruined, war-torn city goes horribly wrong.
Cover art by the exceptionally skilled and talented Orbie. You can find her on Twitter @swordberries.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Powerpoint Pro
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 256
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The cover art is nice. Just had to say that here. Moving onto the story, the premise is fairly simple and seems like a real downer right off the bat, it does set the tone and gives a sense of what the title might be about. As we go through the story it gets into what seems to be the monotone, hum-drum of a regular day. Then we get the ending, which we see one aspect hit hard, then the final part seals it and yet really doesn't make it stronger. Thematically, I'd say it works, but if going for a punchy ending it could have ended a few lines before that.