Turnabout Teardown: Steadfast Spring
Self-Published
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Description
The Dearest Family are one of the most powerful factions in Newgrounds City. Not that it mattered to you of course. But maybe you should've considered that before you tried investigating them. Now jobless and beaten to near death, disgraced from the NCPD, (Y/N) descends to the criminal underworld and underground music scenes to assemble a team for revenge. With hatred in mind it begins a conflict that will ultimately tear Newgrounds City apart.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Odaocer
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 12,105
Chapters(45 total)
- Track 45 - By the FiresideNov 13, 2023
- Track 44 - A Shadowy MeetingNov 10, 2023
- Track 43 - Glitch in the SystemNov 6, 2023
- Track 42 - HomeDec 9, 2023
- Track 41 - VigilOct 30, 2023
- Track 40 - The LightbringersOct 27, 2023
- Track 39 - Earthquake, Pt. IV - Russian RouletteOct 23, 2023
- Track 38 - Earthquake, Pt. III - JailbreakOct 20, 2023
- Track 37 - Operation Earthquake, Part II - State of EmergencyOct 16, 2023
- Track 36 - Earthquake, Part I - Tinker TailorOct 12, 2023
- Track 35 - In PreparationOct 9, 2023
- Track 34 - RestOct 6, 2023
- Track 33 - Blood MeridianOct 2, 2023
- Track 32 - A Night on the CitySep 29, 2023
- Track 31 - Challenge AcceptedSep 25, 2023
- Track 30 - Lunch DateSep 22, 2023
- Track 29 - A Daring ChallengeSep 18, 2023
- Track 28 - All the Kings MenSep 15, 2023
- Track 27 - From the StarsSep 11, 2023
- Track 26 - Mazes, Daycares & AllergiesSep 7, 2023
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Community Reviews(1)
- GamadaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Turnabout Teardown is, I must say, quite a ride.
Based on FNF lore, I dived in headlong, not knowing anything about FNF myself.
You would think this was foolish. In truth, I really apreciated the read (and still do!).
The POV somewhat flips everything on its head, with a second personn view of the events. This makes the approach, I find, really direct and gripping.
The style is quite good. In truth, it does not delve deep in exposition, instead throwing the reader in the world with no safety net. It remains surgical and sharp, carrying the story quite efficiently.
Now that we're at it, let's talk about the story! Who doesn't love a good old fahsionned tale of corruption? A cop, fashioned into a knight in sour armor, turns into a unstoppable force, adamant in getting vindication! The very noir atmosphere is just icing on the cake, at this point.
And the character, well, the characters are pretty good. Although I put five stars more because I love the little doodles describing them than anything else, but what can I say? I like doodles.
The grammar is sometimes a bit lacking, but it's nothing an edit spree can't fix -wink wink nudge nudge- as Odaocer is quite cooperative.
All in all, a very interesting read YOU should check out.
Do it. Do it now.