TT (Old Version)

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First draft of Timesmith.

This is my first story, and somewhat of an experiment. I wanted to create something fun, but epic. The first 5 chapters are a slower paced introduction, before the story kicks into full gear. Hope you like it!

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Hiatus

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4.4/ 5.0
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31

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Space killerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I recently find up this book and I have to say, I was blown away by the author's writing skills! From the very first page, I was completely engrossed in the story and couldn't put the book down. The plot was intricate and well-crafted, with plenty of twists and turns to keep me guessing. I also appreciated how the author developed the characters throughout the book. Each character had their own unique personality and motivations, which made them feel like real people rather than just fictional characters.
    One thing that really stood out to me about this book was the author's attention to detail. The world-building was excellent, with vivid descriptions of the setting that made it easy to imagine myself in the story. I also appreciated the way the author incorporated different cultures and traditions into the story, which added depth and richness to the world.
    The pacing of the book was spot-on, with just the right amount of action and dialogue to keep me engaged. I also appreciated the way the author tackled some important themes, such as the power of love and the importance of standing up for what you believe in.
    Overall, I would highly recommend this book to anyone looking for an immersive and well-crafted story. The author's writing skills are truly impressive, and I can't wait to read more of their work in the future.
  • PenguinsAreScaryRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    *leans on the grey cushion and starts talking* This story had been written by either a Dutch person or a native speaker. I didn't need to point out any grammar or spelling issues that are not the inconsistent spelling of one character's name.
    The style didn't get into the way either, so that is a plus. Style to me is one of the things that only gets noticed when it's off. Good style is like clear water to a fish.
    The characters are interesting, but you sometimes get the feeling that the viewpoint character was the least interested one of them all. Like, Goblin Lady from the first chapters seemed more interesting than Evan.
    *the grey cushion stands up and baraags, is actually the elephant in the room* The story has a fragmented feel to it, that tends to lower stakes. Especially initially, the story seemed more like a pile of Lego bricks than a story. So the start is something you need to crawl through. But why would you crawl through something with a payoff that is only clear about 10 chapters in? I was close to throw in the towel initially. This way of writing leaves just so many dangling threads hanging, and metaphorically speaking they tend to get in your eyes. *Baraag! trumpets the elephant in the room before trampling into another PenguinsAreScary review*
  • malinizgeldiRoyal Road
    1.0
    From the very first episodes, we saw that a boy was kidnapped because of his "immortality" bever. So what does mc do when he can somehow escape the "market" area for these nobles? Of course, he immediately goes and tells his friends about his skills. From where ? Of course, so that they can tell others in the future and the novel will come to the war parts. this is the only way i can tell it, mc is telling his secrets to others in order to cause trouble and have his family killed.
    yes mc can break the 4th wall like deadpool because i don't see any other reason why he's telling his skills to their head. He creates enemies so they can hunt him down in the future.
    If you think about it, he says he wants to protect his sister at every moment. but what does it do to achieve this? Of course, it makes him a target for the future.
    I find it funny when I think about it. I clearly do not recommend it.