The Wretch of Siradorn

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Transformed into a murderous beast with no recollection of their past, and plagued by the memories of their victims, Amiran seeks answers among the fortress city of Siradorn: one of few bastions of man that has held against the tide of an unknown evil.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
L.A. Vines

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FANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSUPERNATURALSTRONG LEADPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADHORRORNON-HUMAN LEADLOW FANTASYGRIMDARKVILLAINOUS LEADPROGRESSION

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4.5/ 5.0
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4
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859

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • LightChaserRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This excerpt from "Thou who art poor, who art hungry, who art alone, come to Siradorn" is a chilling descent into a world of darkness and despair. The creature's transformation, a grotesque metamorphosis from man to something otherworldly, is both fascinating and horrifying. The author's vivid descriptions of the dungeon's squalor and the creature's physical changes create a visceral and unsettling atmosphere.
    The slow burn of the narrative, coupled with the creature's internal monologue, builds tension and suspense. The psychological torment the creature endures, both from the physical conditions of its imprisonment and the mental anguish of its transformation, is truly haunting. I'm eager to learn more about the creature's origins, the nature of Siradorn, and the ultimate purpose of its imprisonment.
    While the excerpt is rich in atmosphere and character, I'm curious to see how the author will balance the creature's monstrous nature with its potential for empathy and understanding. Will it remain a creature of darkness, or will it evolve into something more complex?
    Overall, this is a promising start to a dark and disturbing tale. I'm eager to see where the story goes next.