The Way of The Silver Sea "Rough Draft"

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Description

The state of normality fades away.

The Way of The Silver Seatells the story of Daniel, a well-to-do city worker who found his life on a trajectory. Following the attack at the venue, he had awakened his newfound abnormal amounts of qi within his body, likely correlated to his discovery that blue blood came from his wound. Afterward, one of his closest friends had passed away from an unexpected homicide that could also tie to the venue. While figuring out how to deal with a tragic event, his newfound capabilities attracted the attention of individuals from the other world. Now he has two scenarios to fulfill, find the ones responsible related to the venue attack and his closest friend's death, and set on a journey to the other world.

Was it all worth it?

This is a rough manuscript.Remake is live!!

Volume One(2024- 2025):Chapter 1- Epilogue Three

Volume Two (2025):Chapter 68 - 90

The Raal Terran Manuscript (Remake):Raal Terran

What to expect:

Epic Fantasy.

Fairly Strong to Stronger MC

Multiple PoVs expressed

A Huge World of endless possibilities

A mix of soft and hard magic

Xianxia Elements

Anti-Hero/Hero's Journey

Usage of Multiple Languages

Mythology

Heavy Worldbuilding and Civilization Aspects.

"Supplemental" & "Soft"Litrpg system. (Won't appear till way later.)

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2024
Author: TheLetarus

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 389
Views: 50,969

Chapters(133 total)

What readers say about The Way of The Silver Sea "Rough Draft"

“Alright - that sums it up really. There is nothing I find exceptional or egregious. I did come out with an overall positive view of the whole thing. The style is pronounced, the story is there, the grammar is not the easiest to decipher, and the characters…”
Merlin PendragonRoyal Road4.0 / 5
“It could be a good read if it wasn't filled with unnecessary words that make it so that you have to decipher what is being said. The author makes it unnecessarily complicated. If it was reworked a bit (a lot) it could be a pretty good book. As it is now, I…”
Dark0idRoyal Road3.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

Merlin PendragonRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Alright - that sums it up really. There is nothing I find exceptional or egregious. I did come out with an overall positive view of the whole thing. The style is pronounced, the story is there, the grammar is not the easiest to decipher, and the characters seem flat. Understand that I do not intend to offend the author but I did find it very difficult to read through.
Style - The author has a somewhat unique style. Events come thick and fast which I usually find appealing, however the phraseology can make it quite hard to follow and I found myself lost a couple of times.
Story - The story seems to be exactly as the synopsis described - someone who works in an office setting, getting powers, and learning to cope with that.
Grammar - I don't know this to be the case, but it feels as if this was written in one language and translated into english. There are a number of examples:
"Her tears poured out of her eyelids, wetting her cheeks" -- Chapter 1. Tears come from tear ducts and not eyelids.
The constant reference to one of the characters as "Mother Elaine" -- Chapter 2, even though she is not a nun but rather the mother of Ava - a character who died after the first chapter (I think) - this feels like a turn of phrase more common to the asian languages than the english. Where they call their neighbours aunt and uncle.
3."With thirty minutes till his end of shift, he was ready to announce it." -- Chapter 3 another example of a very different way of speaking: I might say - "With thirty minutes till his shift ended..."
There were very few spelling mistakes to the author's credit. There were however, a number of times when the tense changed without good reason, or the POV (from he to we.)
Character - I struggled to identify with any of the characters, once I had deciphered what was trying to be said. That said, I only read the first three chapters and it's normal to build up a character over time, having more action towards the beginning.
In conclusion; if you are a fan
Dark0idRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
It could be a good read if it wasn't filled with unnecessary words that make it so that you have to decipher what is being said. The author makes it unnecessarily complicated. If it was reworked a bit (a lot) it could be a pretty good book. As it is now, I can't get past the second chapter.