The story I plan on using for my minecraft animation

This is a story I plan on using for my minecraft animation, I'm not a writer please give me any advice on writing.

But basically the story will have a "present" and memory. The povs will switch between the female char and male char.. im still figuring out names..

I do plan on having certain stuff be in a different language.. like as if the translation is having a hard time.

Oh name ideas please let know in the comments.

So basically no schedule yet.. any advice please give. Oh and the tags.. ill probably need to fix..

Hope you enjoy this story as much as I imagine the animation will be :)

Shortyhalfpint out.