The solider running
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A rift was open sucking in soliders into another world and showing the maddness that follows
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Views
- 907
Chapters(2 total)
Reviews
No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!
Community Reviews(2)
- Colin GravesRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Over all I enjoyed the story. There was enough intrigue and details left out during the opening to keep me reading and wanting to know more. The only downside is there are some issues with grammar and formatting consistency.
Example: swapping between, two, 2 and 3 in a single sentence. But that's me being nit picky, for future works I would just recommend picking either writing numbers out or not. - realnotperfectOfficialRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0As always, these are just my humble opinions.
The one thing I didn’t like crazy much was the small mention of real-world politics; but, again, this is merely a personal preference.
A few punctuation marks were missing, in a few little places.
I loved this. I really can’t say much. I was requested to do this review when I was not expecting to do anything and on a work day, and I read most of it on mobile. This is my simplest review so far.
Flawless, story-wise. I had no confusions (thank you, author) and everything was easy to follow for anyone with a moderate English vocabulary. I loved how straightforward it was, I never had to wonder, “Hey, what on earth are they doing?” or “Okay, I don’t get it right now, what’s the point here?”
I super appreciated how actions and physical appearances were always described. The use of adverbs and adjectives (which, unfortunately, some authors REALLY, REALLY MISS) was present and used very well.
Amazing work, thank you to the author.
Please note: Again, I was requested to do this review very early (at the time of this writing there are only two chapters) but what I have seen here so far is very, very good.