The Road of Good Intentions

The Sun and Moon Goddesses rule the world of Erit with little interference on their part after The Great War but that does not stop them from helping minor deities or even humans when it interests them. That's what happened to Alice, a freshman college student who just happened to end up on the wrong side of death. How will she cope with the loss of her humanity and her new found moon elfity? How will the world of Erit deal with the return of the long extinct race of moon elves?

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Hello, this is my first big time story with large world building and the like so please let me know anything that can be improved on.

All criticism is welcome because I hope to get better, be as harsh as needed.

Note: I might rewrite chapters if people find too many issues with them.