The Princess's Man
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
After the death of his father, Will Garrow was intent on killing the royal family, that was until he learned the details of his father's relationship with the king. Now, he acts as a bodyguard and constant companion for First Princess Ilicia Ter Koltshelg, and their adventures take them to new and exciting lands. All the while Will seeks revenge against the one he blames for his fathers death.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Akmedrah
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 36
- Views
- 20,915
Chapters(37 total)
- PART 17Jul 25, 2023
- PART 16Jul 25, 2023
- PART 15Jul 25, 2023
- PART 14Jul 25, 2023
- PART 13Jul 25, 2023
- PART 12Jul 25, 2023
- PART 11Jul 25, 2023
- PART 10Jul 5, 2023
- PART 9Jul 5, 2023
- PART 8Jul 5, 2023
- PART 7Jul 5, 2023
- PART 6Jul 5, 2023
- PART 5Jul 5, 2023
- PART 4Jul 5, 2023
- PART 3Jul 5, 2023
- PART 2Jul 4, 2023
- PART 1Jun 29, 2023
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Community Reviews(1)
- Frosty I. FrostRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This one is a nice fantasy genre story with solid points. The main character, Will, is a mix of human-elf-orc and he is quite rare. His mother was an Elf and her entire race was wiped out. He has a good drive and he is a badass. He is assigned to be the bodyguard of the Princess and they set out on their journey, overcoming many problems as they go on. Of course, they inevitably feel attracted to each other but the key point here is that they almost do it at some point, and the princess back out at the last second. What does Will do? He says it's okay you don't have to force yourself.
This is incredibly rare with stories such as this one and it is refreshing to see a main character that doesn't think he is entitled to everything around himself. But, the rest are pretty weak in my opinion and they need some work. The Princess also needs a little bit of work in her character since she doesn't develop that much.
The other thing I ABSOLUTELY LOVE about this one is the grammar, spelling, and punctuation. They are really well done and mostly flawless save for a couple of errors here and there but that is completely normal. One issue I have though, is that the first chapter is almost masterfully edited but the rest aren't as good as the first one, in terms of editing and paragraphs.
If all the other chapters are edited like the first one (the first chapter has great paragraph lengths and the dialogue is really easy to follow), the quality would go up significantly.