The other side

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  • Let me put down the full disclaimer outright and say that this review was done in Goodheart as a swap, and am absolutely glad to have stumbled into a Gem such as this. Style: a decriptive and detail oriented style that shows in how he depicts the character…
    jaxobelRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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  • jaxobelRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Let me put down the full disclaimer outright and say that this review was done in Goodheart as a swap, and am absolutely glad to have stumbled into a Gem such as this.
    Style: a decriptive and detail oriented style that shows in how he depicts the character and conveys the story so fluidly and direct. The conciseness of it all helps abound all those components into a solid story that while not my cup of tea has allowed me to continue desiring to read more.
    Grammar: There are some minor mistakes that can be noticed, either in the structure or better verbiage but I'm a bit of a snob for high grammar so that is on me.
    Story: an interesting take on the Isekai franchise that has been highly saturated with over-the-top gimmicks such as reincarnating as [insert random household appliance]. The author's take on it is different and nostalgic to some old animes I've watched but with an Actual twist to it.
    Characters: They are portrayed in a manner that allows one to feel that they are immersed in walking, and interacting with the characters and the environment. Showing that they are alive in the world farther out than the background characters who simply provide dialogue and no interaction with the environment.
    What we have here is a polished story of intricate detail, still too early to say that it can end well. But with a very solid strong start based on the 2 chapters totaling almost 10k words which is a very solid note taking into account the length of time needed to polish the grammar and style he has chosen for a first-person narrative. I have no choice but to applaud his style as it is a style I enjoy immensely due to its descriptive nature and detail-oriented touch. And I leave it with a thank you for creating this hidden gem.