The Last Particle

Self-Published

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Description

If you're after:

A system apocalypse grounded in logic and (pseudo)science

A mature main character (42, bad knees, reluctantly acquainted with his first prostate exam) who evolves steadily rather than turning into a superhero overnight

A world that fights against the collapse, as a strange new power awakens…

ThenThe Last Particleis for you.

With chapters of 2,000-3,000 words dropping five times a week (mostly more), this story explores what happens when humanity encounters Zyphron, an exotic particle unlocking abilities that most never dreamed of… or wanted. For Tomas Knez—a former entrepreneur who fights his own demons —the Zyphron phenomenon stirs something deep inside, putting him in a unique position to shape how the world responds to the rise of the mysterious G.A.I.A system.

Release Schedule:I aim to publish one chapter a day,

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Dr.Insano

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 38
Views: 6,512

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

Apollo149Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The Last Particle is a captivating blend of science fiction and character-driven drama. The author skillfully explores the implications of a world-changing discovery, weaving a tale of personal growth, moral dilemmas, and the potential for both destruction and salvation.
Tomas Knez, a reluctant hero, is a compelling protagonist. His internal struggles and evolving worldview are both relatable and thought-provoking. The author's exploration of his character's past and present is well-executed, providing depth and nuance to the narrative.
The world-building is impressive, with a believable blend of science and mysticism. The author's attention to detail and his ability to ground the story in real-world settings add to the overall authenticity of the narrative.
The pacing is well-balanced, with both slow-burn character development and fast-paced action sequences. The author's writing style is engaging, with vivid descriptions and well-developed characters.
The Last Particle is a must-read for fans of science fiction and character-driven stories. It's a thought-provoking exploration of the human condition and the power of individual choice.
burkleysmithRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
What a great premise! I love a system that seems like it could actually happen. The writing is solid and I'm interested to find out more. Chapter 2, here I come.
These are just extra words to fill the space. I mean, come on algo, I only read one chapter so far. Is that enough words? I hope so. It's a good start so far.
Still not 200 words. Man how much can one person have to say. Ummm .. little baby bubby numbers.
Ok Imma say it all twice. Sorry so long lol
What a great premise! I love a system that seems like it could actually happen. The writing is solid and I'm interested to find out more. Chapter 2, here I come.
What a great premise! I love a system that seems like it could actually happen. The writing is solid and I'm interested to find out more. Chapter 2, here I come.
chris ryanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really like it feels real. I need more!!! I like the approach you are taking with the system. This is my first read on rainbow road I need more faster. Just kidding keep up the good work. The writing is better with out ai so continue down that road.