The Immortal World

Self-Published

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Description

A world filled with Immortals...

Underworld x Twilight x Mayfaire Witches x Shadow Hunters x Legacies x The Old Guard

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Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Jeremy001Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This one is slow paced, but the intensity spikes now and again with bouts of action and emotion to spice it up from the day to day.
    Xavier is in an interesting spot. Part of the fun is seeing him remember old things and learn new things. His mind is a bit of a mess, intentionally mind you, and hes gradually unraveling it as time goes on.
    Very neat characters, tbh I didn't expect some of the crossovers, and how it's done is very cool.
  • TorenRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    But I'm hooked for now....
    I can't say I've ever dove into Twilight fanfiction...and despite the first 30 chapters here being in Forks, im not sure this counts as that.
    Focusing on secondary or tertiary characters(other than the MC) so much of the plot. And now crossing into the 40s chapters, you just opened the world way up, I don't have a clue where this is gonna go. And I'm down for that; combining fandoms, but making valid attempts to make them real, or at least more than the shallow, surface level characters we might think we know.
    I want to know how this world works, and how this story ends...and why this story has no other reviews at this point.
  • blaintintnoobRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    So very early on into this story myself, and the mc is a very nerfed version of the character hes using, and the supernatural creatures of twillight are a much more buffed variant of themselves, not sure if thats going to get addressed in the story properly or not, the story is competently written