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The protagonist died, and regained consciousness in an unknown location. He kept some memories, and quickly realise he was reincarnated in an alien life form... A life form which wasn't unfamiliar. A life form full of potential. The protagonist also realise that there will be a lot of trouble in the future with the other races... Another "reincarnation in another world" story, but it's not a fantasy world. WARNING: Mature content of all kind once in a while, and more in later chapters

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NemesisQRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

rly good keep up the good work cant wait for new chapters !! :)

TimthecarpRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

So far its really good. Hope you get to like 100-200 chaps with this thing :)

Frozen88Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

i like it please counting it and maybe have the last person be a protoss and all 3 of theme band together

Dracko2121Royal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

A great start to a zerg fanfiction and I to hope you get several hundred chapters out of it.
It is also possible to use stacraft as a base and take to self made or game galaxys.

Nehpets747Royal Road

★★★★ 4.0

The stories dark elements reminds me of Overlord and its interesting take on a game has unique. Keep up the good work and my advise would be to limit the comparisons it has when it comes to the plot. Make your own plot that is vastly different from the game. I believe that there should be more main side characters that is loyal to MC. I Hope you work hard at the plot development.

ArkAngel 319Royal Road

★★★★ 4.0

Dear tonyorobsky
So far, I have vastly enjoyed reading your story. It is something of a unique story when comparing it to the other fan fiction works that are based on the starcraft universe. The way in which you have written this story allows you the unique oppertunity to create a whole new starcraft universe and plot, while at the same time allowing you to keep older elements that made us, the fans, love and enjoy the starcraft world (such as characters like Kerrigan, and Jim Rennor). When reading your story I saw that you mentioned that you belived you had messed up the Lien Qui Nash chapter of your writting after listening to the negative reviews of your readers. I realy do not beive this to be entirely true. I loved the concempt of having a secound influencial reencarnate character in your story, which is something other stories like Overlord for example do not have for plot simplicity. I do think though that the reason you got so many negative reviews from your readers on that chapter was do to the fact that you spent too much time away from your main character when writing the introduction of Nash. When writing of Nash's perspective in the story I think you should write less on his own develement as a character, until later on in the story mabey. Instead use him as a great way to write about your main characters actions, apperence and adventures from the view points of the terran faction persective of the story, Nash being oblivious to the fact that it is his friend who is the leader of the new fourth faction. For example, let say hypothetialy our beloved main character decides to finnaly expand his territory by invading a human world, or attacking a protos fleet, you can describe your main characters actions and awesomeness from Nash perspective as a member of the Hyperion crew under Jim raynor "wink, wink, nedge, nudge", or as a defender on the ground defending against our main protagonists forces ect. Over all i realy did enjoyed your story and am excited

coolbloodedRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

vary good for a beging of your story. love how you evoled them into what they are. you could take more from halo like the odst or spartens. you could also have a 30 year time line like you would find on fanfiction mass effect storys. you could also take peices from diffrent games or storys. One of my top 10 storys!!!!!!!!!!

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