The First Dungeon Core

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

Yotro

• Chapter 19 - Of Manipulation And Teachers
  Sep 22, 2021
• Chapter 18 - The diplomatic meeting
  Sep 18, 2021
• Chapter 17 - A Good Day For A Dungeon
  Sep 15, 2021
• Chapter 16 - The War Of The Midgets
  Sep 11, 2021
• Chapter 15 - Their dark counterpart
  Sep 8, 2021
• Chapter 14 - Expanding the Dungeon
  Sep 4, 2021
• Chapter 13 - Calming the “evil spirit”
  Sep 1, 2021
• Chapter 12 - The people from below
  Aug 28, 2021
• Chapter 11 - Here we go again
  Aug 25, 2021
• Chapter 10 – The Divided Battle
  Aug 5, 2021
• Chapter 9 – Preparing For The War
  Aug 4, 2021
• Chapter 8 – Meeting The Neighbors
  Aug 2, 2021
• Chapter 7 – Having A Look Around
  Aug 1, 2021
• Chapter 6 – On My Last Columns
  Jul 31, 2021
• Chapter 5 – The War Against The Many-Legs
  Jul 30, 2021
• Chapter 4 – Calming The Mountains And Attacking The Foe
  Jul 29, 2021
• Chapter 3 – The Sticky Threat
  Jul 28, 2021
• Chapter 2 – My Biggest Challenge
  Jul 27, 2021
• Chapter 1 – Building My First Layer
  Jul 26, 2021
• Prologue – How It All Began
  Aug 15, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• PauliRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The fiction is about a dungeon core that explores a young world and grows up within it, together with all the different kinds of experiences, challenges, and people. This makes the story quite interesting and exciting because around every corner there is something new and not before seen.
  This together with the author's descriptive, action-packed, and "Show not tell" writing style makes this story a sure rising star among other amateur authors. I am excited to read where the author guides the little dungeon core and can't wait to read more about the adventures and tales of the first dungeon core.
• Indecisive_WandererRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I've really taken a liking to this book and the ideas/concepts it uses. I like how the author structures their chapters and how the main character thinks, being something that came into existance recently. I also like the different creatures the author makes in this book. And while the author's grammar could use some work, I have noticed that they take edit seggestions seriously and correct their mistakes.
  I will continue reading your story with great interest
• WildstaraRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The story is excellent. I like how the author designs the races, monsters, and zones of the dungeon. The only problem I have is the grammar. One example is how peak is written as peek. This is fine as the story more than covers the occasional mistakes. However, chapter 18 is where the author's grammar skills become a problem. Before this, the author avoided dialogue, but he writes a lot of it in the chapter. The dialogue is terrible, with errors all over the place. Overall the story is excellent but needs an editor. (To the author if they read this. Try using Grammarly, it is a free website you can use to fix glaring issues but not all. Or hire an editor. Your story is still great though.)
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