The First Dungeon Core

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

Yotro

• Chapter 39 – The Elven Discussions
  Dec 18, 2021
• Chapter 38 - The Restless Orcs
  Dec 11, 2021
• Chapter 37 - A Scent Of Undeath
  Dec 4, 2021
• Chapter 36 - Building the Gletscher
  Nov 27, 2021
• Chapter 35 - Out of this world
  Nov 20, 2021
• Chapter 34 - Developing The Foundations
  Nov 13, 2021
• Chapter 33 - A Lot Of Dungeon Development
  Nov 10, 2021
• Chapter 32 - What’s going to come
  Nov 6, 2021
• Chapter 31 - A Twist Of Divinity
  Nov 3, 2021
• Chapter 30 - The orc-delvers’ adventure
  Oct 30, 2021
• Chapter 29 - Losing the refugees' city?!
  Oct 27, 2021
• Chapter 28 - The Battle Of Affinities Part 2
  Oct 23, 2021
• Chapter 27 - The Battle Of Affinities Part 1
  Oct 20, 2021
• Chapter 26 - Reuniting With An Old Acquaintance
  Oct 16, 2021
• Chapter 25 - Close Call With A Dragon
  Oct 13, 2021
• Chapter 24 - The Start Of A Journey
  Oct 9, 2021
• Chapter 23 - Time for dungeon building
  Oct 6, 2021
• Chapter 22 - The “Mysterious” Merchant
  Oct 2, 2021
• Chapter 21 - Rough Experiences On Top
  Sep 29, 2021
• Chapter 20 - Breaking Through To The Surface
  Sep 25, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• PauliRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The fiction is about a dungeon core that explores a young world and grows up within it, together with all the different kinds of experiences, challenges, and people. This makes the story quite interesting and exciting because around every corner there is something new and not before seen.
  This together with the author's descriptive, action-packed, and "Show not tell" writing style makes this story a sure rising star among other amateur authors. I am excited to read where the author guides the little dungeon core and can't wait to read more about the adventures and tales of the first dungeon core.
• Indecisive_WandererRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I've really taken a liking to this book and the ideas/concepts it uses. I like how the author structures their chapters and how the main character thinks, being something that came into existance recently. I also like the different creatures the author makes in this book. And while the author's grammar could use some work, I have noticed that they take edit seggestions seriously and correct their mistakes.
  I will continue reading your story with great interest
• WildstaraRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The story is excellent. I like how the author designs the races, monsters, and zones of the dungeon. The only problem I have is the grammar. One example is how peak is written as peek. This is fine as the story more than covers the occasional mistakes. However, chapter 18 is where the author's grammar skills become a problem. Before this, the author avoided dialogue, but he writes a lot of it in the chapter. The dialogue is terrible, with errors all over the place. Overall the story is excellent but needs an editor. (To the author if they read this. Try using Grammarly, it is a free website you can use to fix glaring issues but not all. Or hire an editor. Your story is still great though.)
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