The Eternal Accord RAW Edition

Brothers Callahan and Rowan get swept up into a divine cosmic war for reality after a monster hunting mission goes terribly wrong. Follow them and their fairy companion Nyve, as they navigate through the troubles that plague the city they reluctantly call home.

This is the unedited AI free version of my story. I'm hoping that maybe those who are skeptical of using AI as a tool might be more comfortable commenting on this version. I'd love feedback on either version of the story.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/104378/the-eternal-accord A link to the edited version for anyone curious to compare, I'd love to know what you guys think, if I go overboard and let the AI add or remove too much, or if it keeps the writing pretty much the same.

Fair warning, this will be messy, I usually go over grammar, and punctuation and flow with the AI paragraph by paragraph so all my usual mistakes which I make a lot of are very, very present here moreso than they would be in the edited version.