The Devil King

Self-Published

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Description

This story is a Frame Story (story within a story), and as such will contain two summaries to denote both.

A man was summoned from his home world to another to serve as a Hero for the desperate Human race. Where, in between the worlds, he is tortured whist obtaining specialised abilities and a Class. However, just as he enters this new world, he is slain by way of dragon fire. Afterwards, his soul is picked up by a Goddess called Azazel and strikes a bargain with her. For a new life upon her world, he will give her entertainment. Unbeknownst to himself, she has more plans for him than simple “entertainment”.

Ah, but the Universe has its own plans for the man who was summoned. Be it for good or for ill, the worlds will note the rise of something more.

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Sarah, the Goddess of Iridescent Colours, is the Goddess Queen of the Terran Pantheon after marrying a being called the Ageless who is the God King of said Pantheon. However, after many a century of being together, and giving birth to their only child, she has come to suspect her husband of breaking the oldest laws set aside within the Universe. Tampering or re-writing a being's Story. Of which contains a being's everything; from birth to death, everything is written within their Story. Tampering with such books would not only mark the being, but cause the Librarians who take care of such items to fly into a rage and slay the perpetrator.

However, with the Ageless being the fifth strongest being within the Universe, she doubts if she could find a Librarian strong enough to slay her husband for the crimes he has committed. How did she come to suspect him? Her own story contains many pages which were re-written, and the one who has access to it is both herself and her husband. Therefore, she searches for answers, and has been given the story titled The Devil King in order to find that which she desires. Even if the cost is to read the whole book before she could act fully.

Special thanks toHot-Gothics/Agelyn Starrfor the cover art. If you would like to view the full artwork, clickhere.

This can also be found on a website run by a good friend and fan of my work. One that I've both bought and given my blessing to run.https://terranlibrary.com/

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
97
Views
177,191

Chapters(70 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Lord MandragonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This book is a master piece. Well rounded, different, changing and easy to follow.
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    I always wondered how reincarnees [those tha have been reincarnated] dont meet others like themselves and talk about here lives on earth. I mean 6,316 people die each hour on earth alone, and there are other speices out there in the vastness of the universe (It would be a gihugic waste of space [literally])
    The MC progresses nicely and doesn't become OP and is, in fact, oposed to becoming too powerful too fast. and does not in any part of the story gain a harem. Which i love that he avoided that particular cliché. over all as i said in the title a must read.
    quick side note, i wonder when we are going to see the mask on the cover in ther story.
    k on
  • XuzoRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A great story, worthy of more attention. I was first put off by the synopsis but I urge you to give it a try.
    Reads like a novel, well thought out and we'll constructed. I'm a little upset by the litrpg tag and the little use that it has been seen thus far (ch 26) but I hope to seem more of this in the future.
    Fascinating back story and allusion to the main character being more than first expected by even the God he interacts with. Very excited to see how deep the rabbit hole goes!
  • MastersgtjamesRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The grammar is actually not that bad. It is however, repetitive.
    repetitive to the degree of feeling pretentious, or overly done.
    Then there is the meat of the story, the MC. Who just goes with everything.
    given powers that feel Meh. Such as write what you want to happen, cuz you were a "Wordsmith". Would have preferred him having to speak what he wants to happen personally. Several redundancies in the story.  The appearance of the queen appeared.... no thanks.
    add to that the MC instantly goes from beloved son and author, to murderhappy vampire. hmmmmmmm no.