The Chaos Immortal

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

nanda322

• Chapter 39 - Purchasing a Weapon
  May 27, 2017
• Chapter 38 - Cultivators in Space
  May 26, 2017
• Chapter 37 - Space Traveller
  May 25, 2017
• Chapter 36 - Long Tian's struggle
  May 25, 2017
• Chapter 35 - Back to the Forest
  May 17, 2017
• Chapter 34 - It's a Trap!
  May 9, 2017
• Chapter 33 – The Enemy of My Enemy is a Friend?
  May 8, 2017
• Chapter 32 - Prelude to the Storm
  May 8, 2017
• Chapter 31 - Unusual Atmosphere
  Apr 30, 2017
• Chapter 30 - Lucky?
  Apr 30, 2017
• Chapter 29 - Poison Mist Valley
  Apr 27, 2017
• Chapter 28 - Breakthrough!
  Apr 25, 2017
• Chapter 27 - Soul Formation
  Apr 23, 2017
• Chapter 26 - Sparring
  Apr 22, 2017
• Chapter 25 - Sword Arts
  Apr 21, 2017
• Chapter 24 - Friends
  Apr 19, 2017
• Chapter 23 - Venturing into the Forest
  Apr 16, 2017
• Chapter 22 - Taking a Mission
  Apr 16, 2017
• Chapter 21 - Blue Cloud City
  Apr 13, 2017
• Chapter 20 - First Blood
  Apr 10, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• Forgiv3n324Royal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I like your story, quite a lot honestly, but like stated before super rushed, I feel that because your chapters are short you feel like something worthy of a chapters worth of experience should have occured. Though with your length of chapters you either cram it together and rush it or you write more in detail and it feels like the story goes no where which leaves you stuck, so my advice is either release the same length chapters and go into more detail but release them more often, or write longer chapters that go into proper details of events and scenery less frequently.
  ( Though me and the other guy agree that it feels rushed dont try to forcefully change that instantly or rewrite or something like that it's a gradual process to prefect writing skills and im guessing that is why you're here to practice.)
  - P.S I dont want you to rewrite because im selfish and don't want to wait for you to release enough chapters to catch back up LOL
• MastersgtjamesRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  AMAZING PREMISE, lots of potential, only problems I can see are
  1. Characters are too shallow/weak. they feel rushed and without any real character.
  2. the story is definetly rushed, each chapter so far feels like you crammed 3 or more chapters into one with how empty the descriptions are and how rushed it all feels.
  other than those issues, i like the premise, feels like it could be amazing. but needs work.