The Changing Era [A Post-Apocalypse Progression LitRPG]

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Description

20 years ago, a monster outbreak changed the world. Billions of humans perished. Stronghold cities with advanced technology alone prospered, leaving the rest of humanity to fend for themselves in small remnants of “civilization.”

In this cruel, new world, Reina Romane just wants to get through high school and live a normal life with her friends. But there is a dark conspiracy in the works: an organization that wishes to create a global utopia by wiping out the current world order. They will stop at nothing to achieve this, even erasing humanity. Reina must join forces with unlikely allies if her world is to have any chance of survival.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: DreameroftheUnknown

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 33
Views: 7,667

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

1Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The first chapter is essentially a description of the setting in the form of diary entries. I found it pretty understandable, there's a monster apocalypse happening, and the only things keeping humanity alive are those gifted with powers that can hurt the monsters. I liked the basic premise, so I would reccomend trying this story.
TealiciousTeaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Fun progression fiction with skills ans blue boxes!
06/06/22 - below is outdated review for a chapter that no longer is posted.
Very fun and entertaining, a few style choices add difficulty to the reading but, I highly recommend it.
Vague story description time - The beginning of the end but a rebirth of a new world with superpowers!
Style -
Big paragraphs to read on a phone but there is enough line spacing in the formatting to make them readable for the news reports. I had more difficulty with the diary entries which were harder for me to read as is on my phone. I think there is a way to break up the paragraphs but keep the progression of the text to improve how easy to read the text is.
Actually speaking from experience in analysing news reports and helping teenagers/kids with their writing they can write in single-sentence or a few line paragraphs, so it would still be realistic while also being easier to read.
All italics, except titles, are an interesting choice. I'm not sure why, but it is a feature.
Story -
A mix of diary entries and news reports, I liked the need of the writer to stay try and stay neutral and their attempts to cover all sides of the fictional conflict.
I like the links to Odd Heroes. Subtle enough in this first chapter to be tasteful.
Grammar -
The grammar is mostly fine on the first reading.
Character -
I like the shift in characterisation between the different 'writers'. The news reporter was very trying to cover all sides as well as being formal. The diary entries on the other hand feel far more informal with irrelevant details about the character's personal life but those details make the writer far more human and fleshed out. Wanting their parents to be together is just as important as entire continent conquering creatures.
Final thoughts -
I missed first review because I decided to sleep and write it in the morning. If it isn't the consequences of my actions. BTW, a great start!