The Apocalypse of Evolution

Self-Published

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Description

Six young adults suddenly find themselves in the tutorial and have to survive after the apocalypse comes to Earth. Can they survive and forge a path for themselves in this new world? Kent, Brock, Minya, Emily, Layton, and Drake are thrust into Nightmare difficulty when the Grand AI takes interest in them.

Chapters will be posted on a M/W/F schedule with extra chapters on Thursday if I'm feeling it.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: LegendaryWesley

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 103
Views: 54,258

Chapters(65 total)

What readers say about The Apocalypse of Evolution

“Hmm. It’s a Lit Rpg I suppose. I recommend it to anyone who would like the genre! 4.5/5 Story: You have to read if you really want the story and it was good. A steady pace and its slowly building up which is good for a Lit RPG story. The stats are shown so…”
Boy BayawakRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“Time for another review. The Apocalypse of Evolution...a title that draws you in with a premise. Let's break it down. Style: The author struggles to find their voice in the first few chapters, but once Chapter 3 hits, the style becomes more pronounced, and…”
SerasStreamsRoyal Road4.5 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

Boy BayawakRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Hmm. It’s a Lit Rpg I suppose. I recommend it to anyone who would like the genre!
4.5/5 Story: You have to read if you really want the story and it was good. A steady pace and its slowly building up which is good for a Lit RPG story. The stats are shown so you will have an idea of what the party would be in the future which excites me.
5/5 Grammar: My first language is not English but I appreciate the story because the grammar is good (I don’t have the right to criticize this part) Its good and tells the story in a straight not forward way (I will elaborate this onto the next part)
7/5 Style: Since it is a multiple lead story, the story would push the POV to one of the characters in the party. Its my first time reading something like this and I learned a lot. It was easy to follow though partly because of the good flow (Wink)
4.5/5 Character: The characters in the story is easily discernable. With their stats and their attitude you could tell who’s like (Won’t spoil this part) this and that and what would be their next actions.
5/5 Overall: It’s a good LIT RPG story. You have to read some chunks of it to start appreciating it. Don’t worry though the author is quick at his updates. A hundred of chapters would really start shaping up the whole story!!! LET’S GO!!!
SerasStreamsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Time for another review. The Apocalypse of Evolution...a title that draws you in with a premise. Let's break it down.
Style: The author struggles to find their voice in the first few chapters, but once Chapter 3 hits, the style becomes more pronounced, and you can understand/feel that there is a unique persona that is bleeding through the words on the page/screen. There are distinctive word choices (diction) that allude to an erudite vocabulary that I'm sure will only grow more complex over time. The interweaving of first-person POV between characters (allowing for an external view of a character we had prior experienced from a first-person POV) is well done in the 4th chapter onwards. My one criticism (and the reason for 4/5) is that the style sometimes wavers, for lack of a better term. It's pretty consistent, but when the style drifts, it's noticeable.
Grammar: I teach High School English...I'm trained to find these types of grammar/spelling/writing errors. I found very few which I give the author high praise for. There are a few minor things that can be fixed (a few of which I commented on and pointed out) but overall, an excellent job.
Story: We are kind of launched into the story from the get-go which is not necessarily a bad thing. However, we don't have much time to get to know the characters. I think this is partially because of how many main characters there are. The story itself is solid and straightforward System Apocalypse (which, if that's your cup of tea, you'll enjoy). However, the lack of time spent with each character pre-apocalypse is a bit...dissatisfactory to me. I would like to see a bit more characterization before the world goes to crap.
Character: This is the strongest point. Despite having a relatively small amount of time with each character, their distinctive persona really comes through the narrative. And we are given little drips of information about their backstory and personality through multiple perspectives and POV observations.
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