Summoner Of Pokemon

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Description

Holland found himself trapped in another world of magic and swords right after his competition with Diantha. With no idea how to get home, he tries his hardest to make it through and reach the other side. Will he achieve his goals? Or was his triumph a fluke after all?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: FloatingLanturn

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 3,161

Chapters(11 total)

What readers say about Summoner Of Pokemon

“This is an interesting idea but lacks execution. The story is interesting and I want to know more it is just the reading experience sucks. This is a combination of lacking details and weird grammar. The story feels like it is moving too quickly, nothing is…”
Sharp_Claw111Royal Road2.5 / 5

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Sharp_Claw111Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
This is an interesting idea but lacks execution.
The story is interesting and I want to know more it is just the reading experience sucks.
This is a combination of lacking details and weird grammar.
The story feels like it is moving too quickly, nothing is explained properly, and I am confused by a lot of the things that are happening all that would be helped by an increase in the time you take for each scene as well as more details.
The second problem is because the fic feels illogical and hard to read. Why does he not release his entire team or at least more of them, where I left off he was described as being pushed to his limits despite only having released 1/3 of his pokemon and that is really confusing. Lastly any of the emotional moments do not land.
To sum it all up this is an interesting story that is dying for some polish