Squirrel Uprising
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A girl tells her friend about her experiences with a squirrel uprising.
A short.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Mad Sadie
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 1,132
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- Fossil ReaderRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5A great short story about the secret squirrel uprising of 2021. I would have given a 5 star. However, the edited version feels like someone went through the original and replaced some words using a thesaurus. Other than the weirdly edited version, I would recommend this to anyone. I hope you continue writing.
- RznRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This is a simple story of a girl's account about how she found herself involved with a bunch of secretly intelligent squirrels and she is trying to tell her disinterested friend. The original chapter is funny and outlandish, the plot of which about squirrels is a known bit so perhaps she seems to be going off a strange dream (at least that's how her friend might take it). It ends well with a change of topics and focus that feels pretty genuine.
Now, the 2nd chapter is the same as the first except after having been run through the machine a few times - and the output is anything but good. This is a good experiment on how a good story can ruined by letting a machine make changes for you. The 'edited version' is not to be taken seriously. My 4.5 reflects the original and not the maimed version, but readers probably should at least see what happened - though I think they have improved over the years, this is still a stunning example. - MK bk-201Royal Road★★★★ 4.0Funny short story about the time a girl encountered the squirrel nation and its uprising against humankind, and catkind.. lets say the world, the second version was very weirdly phrased, it was like formal England english made with Chatgpt who went trough a google translate like most MTL you find.