Soraya Honei

Self-Published

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Description

WARNING! 18+ ONLY

Strong sexually explicit content is contained within this story.

Something was wrong with Soraya.Her skin was stretched too thin, her body burning up, and...sex was constantly on her mind no matter how manytimes she pleasured herself. It was time for her to find somewarm bodies to appease her sexual appetite.

How many men would be enough to satisfy her needs?Would her weird dreams finally stop?Why are there so many attractive people in downtown Los Angeles?

Soraya just managed to get her life in order, and now the inevitable was coming for her. Will she be strong enough to face it?

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • Knight queenRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    WARNING:- KIDS UNDER 18 STAY AWAY FROM THIS FICTION OR ELSE YOU'LL BE SINGLE FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE
    Now that all the kids are gone Let's talk about the story, you plan on giving poor Soraya 6 mates? Wow, you're cruel, as much as my memory serves me right, two of them had already wasted her to her bones, though after math was extremely pleasant, but still SIX how is this going to happen, at some point six of them plus Soraya will be together.
    I feel bad for Soraya, Our girl has to have some serious stamina
    I was wondering, wasn't I supposed to read only till chapter three, how in the fantasy- world I end at chapter 7
    To top it off I'm mad that I have to wait for an update
    Brownie points for that one
    Your way of expressing your story is good, you know your stuff the description of the ambience, the views, the plugs and switches, and the description of single digit's and tunnels are on point, absolutely love it.
    Grammar is not my cup of tea, I got two ostrich-sized eggs on my test so, that should be self-explanatory, the only thing that I could tell you is, that I had no difficulty reading or understanding the fiction at any point
    Character's emotions as well as Characters are well sketched
    Till now, I met two hunks and three beauties briefly, and all of them are interesting.
    I'm super excited to meet the rest of the four but, more excited to meet their digit
  • KyshiesRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Starting the first chapter with a sex scene in an IRL setting (Los Angeles) right off the bat is pretty wild, I'll say that much! It's not a complaint on my end, but it's definitely not the typical fare that the readers of this site consume and generally expect. It does seem like the MC is gonna become some kind of succubus or semen demon or something, based on the premise and the story so far.
    In terms of writing, the story is pretty well-written, with pretty good grammar and prose (the sex scenes especially, my god!). My only issue here is a few sudden shifts to present tense while telling a story in the third-person POV, but that can be easily ironed out with some editing. There aren't too many chapters yet (3 so far at this time of review swapping), but what's available looks promising and interesting enough. Helps that the content so far is pretty raunchy (I'd elaborate, but I think you'd be better off reading chapter 1 and seeing it for yourself), so if you enjoy that sort of this... do give this story a go!
    However, I do feel that the chapters are a bit too long (they're like 3k+ words each!) - it does induce a bit of fatigue while reading, but maybe that's just me. In my opinion (it's my review!) the author would do better breaking each individual chapter into two chapters of 1k-2k words.
  • StrawberryRainRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Emphasis on the spice, and my mouth is on fire.
    I have never seen a story on this site so desperately in need of the sexual content tag. It is well-deserved, and it is not to be underestimated. The author is 100% not joking with the blurb. We go hard from literal sentence #1 and the train does not stop. If you can handle the heat, it's absolutely worth the dive.
    Given the subject matter, both the flavorful aspects and the softer moments are incredibly well-written. The author makes phenomenal usage of every adjective under the sun, and the prose flows beautifully. Scenes are descriptive and easy to imagine--all of them. The way by which subtle foreshadowing is woven into the more intimate exchanges is extremely clever. Truthfully, not something I think I've ever seen out of those sorts of settings before. Highly unique.
    Soraya and her raunchy escapades go from straightforward to surreal when her one-night stands get more than mysterious. What starts as passion ends up dragging her down a rabbit hole she can't explain, and her partners harbor more than meets the eye. Steamy interactions are abound, and the plot is still in full throttle throughout every single one. Behind the intimate curtain is something raw and psychological that builds suspense where most readers are expected to unwind. Never thought I'd be on my toes during that.
    Grammar is flawless. Wonderful syntax and excellent writing. Flows like a dream. Gorgeous.
    Characters in this story are exceedingly interesting. One-night stands leave us with hard and fast character introductions, and we--like Soraya--are left to learn every new face by body language and actions. They speak to leagues more than any conversation, and first impressions are done in a clever way that only a story with such spicy themes could pull off. By no means are they one-and-dones, as much as a one-night stand should be--their ominous behaviors leave their marks long after Soraya has fought her way back home. Sorenth, in particular, is
  • longwindedone1Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This review comes after reading the first four chapters of Soraya Honei. I apologize for any spoilers that I reveal.
    Story:
    The story centers on Soraya, a woman seeking to explore her sexuality and break away from her studious life. She meets a mysterious man named Tariq, who draws her into an otherworldly experience.  Soraya’s reality starts to blur. Her journey seems to explore her sexual exploration, but I'm left wondering if her desires are leading her toward something dark.
    Style:
    This story blends erotica with fantasy. I have never read any erotica in the past, but I can see why people might be into that. The story is written in a sensual style that focuses on Soraya’s internal thoughts and experiences. It is written in third-person and shifts between reality and fantasy smoothly. The erotic scenes are detailed!
    Grammar:
    There are no notable grammar issues, but then, I usually listen to all of my books with the Royal Road app. So, I'm generally not the best person to comment on this part.
    Characters:
    Soraya’s internal conflict and her curiosity are well done. She is relatable (even in the fantastical parts). Tariq remains an intriguing character. There are other characters too. You have Soraya's friends Jasmine and Ahvi. There is also a mysterious woman that comes to Soraya in a dream that is possibly a goddess?
    The best parts of this story are Soraya's interactions with her friends and the sense of velvet mystery between she and Tariq (and the dream sequences in chapter 3). Try it, you'll like it! 5/5
  • tealeryRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I genuinely loved this.
    This was for a review swap but I had so much fun reading it that I hope those who see this review don't take it as an inflated review swap type thing. I even tried to think, "Where can I deduct points?? I don't want this to look biased..." and I just didn't feel like I could deduct points anywhere but grammar (more on that below). This story was truly right up my alley and I'm so glad to have connected with the author.
    Keep in mind that this story is indeed spicy. I'm sure, for that reason alone, it's not for everyone. However, it IS for me. Hehe. Personally, I'm more than down for that. It's also very much for the ladies, I think, and as one of the ladies, I loved it.
    Style: The writing style blends between modern dialogue (very contemporary and recent) and a sort of medieval-ish, fairy-like, magical-type, dreamy, high fantasy style. I didn't find these switches in style to be off-putting. I found them easily digestible. It's most noticeable through the dialogue and which characters are speaking, but it isn't awkward. It felt really fluid. It was also exciting to see the style changing from realistic to dreamlike. I felt like I was truly being pulled along into the story and the madness Soraya encounters.
    Story: At first the story makes you feel like you know where it's going. Maybe not exactly, but you feel like you can make predictions and feel confident in those predictions. Then Chapter 3 happens and you are very politely informed that no you do not know where this is going, strap in. Consider me strapped in. If you start the story and aren't sure if you're going to continue, I implore you to at least make it to Chapter 3. That's where it went from normal girl having a crazy night to David Lynch, Brand New Cherry Flavor type storytelling. I LOVED it.
    Grammar: This is the only place where I felt I could deduct half a star (lol) because I found like a handful of small errors. Considering how many words I read, that's basically nothing (hen