Shattered Veil
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Shattered Veil
A whispering wind. A heartbeat. A single crack of thunder.
Two moons hover in the sky—one gold, one red—watching over a world where magic fades and reality begins to unravel.The veil between realms was never meant to break...But now, something has torn it open.
In the shadows of forgotten kingdoms, a silver-haired girl dreams of voices not her own, and a red-eyed boy walks a path paved in silence and scars.Both are marked by powers they never asked for—by truths that refuse to stay buried.
Shattered Veilis an 18+ dark fantasy anime-inspired tale of sorrow, survival, and fractured identity.Blending atmospheric horror, emotional intensity, and brutal action, it’s a slow descent into magic, memory, and madness.Inspired byElfen Lied,Berserk,Chainsaw Man,Bleach,Black Clover,and JoJo's Bizarre Adventure—this story celebrates the beautiful chaos of broken souls and the worlds they shatter.
The Devil’s Eye Eclipse draws near.And when it opens... nothing stays hidden.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- CrimsonArt
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 6,363
Chapters(47 total)
- Author Note. After all this is how it's going to be...May 22, 2025
- 🎭 bonus Scene: Void Room – The Shadow Figure’s Lament 🎭May 18, 2025
- Scene 34 – Where the Sunlight FailsMay 18, 2025
- Scene 33 – The Cracked SkyMay 18, 2025
- Scene 32 – Part 3: “So… do i care?”May 16, 2025
- Scene 32 — Part 2: “What Do You Want?”May 16, 2025
- Reworked Scene 32 — "Fear and Fruit Juice"May 16, 2025
- Scene 31 (Continued) — "Crimson and the Dying Light"May 16, 2025
- Scene 31 — "The Ones That WatchMay 16, 2025
- 🎭bonus Scene Title: "The Creator's Quiet"🎭May 7, 2025
- Scene 30 — Part 3: "The Forest That Forgot Her"May 4, 2025
- Scene 30 Continued - Part 2: "The Last StandMay 4, 2025
- Scene 30 (continued): "Ashes of the Innocent"May 4, 2025
- Scene 30: "Ashes of the InnocentMay 4, 2025
- Scene 29: “Crimson’s FallMay 4, 2025
- Scene 28: “Crimson vs. The HandsMay 4, 2025
- Scene 27: “The Wave That Shouldn’t ExistMay 4, 2025
- Scene 26: "Kealvor’s Whisper Strings & The Orange Curse Stone"May 4, 2025
- Scene 25 – “The End of Peace”May 4, 2025
- Scene 24 – “Welcome Home… TroubleMay 2, 2025
What readers say about Shattered Veil
“The story is quite enjoyable. So far I can only one say one thing about the story that it has potential. There's no grammatical errors. However, The writing style is not very novel-like?(I don't know the right wording for this). It feels more like a script…”
Golide EdnaRoyal Road4.0 / 5
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- Golide EdnaRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The story is quite enjoyable. So far I can only one say one thing about the story that it has potential. There's no grammatical errors. However, The writing style is not very novel-like?(I don't know the right wording for this). It feels more like a script than a novel. This could cause readers to break immersion.
I believe by fixing these 2 things your story could be even better:
1. Make each chapters at least 1,000 words long. You could merge 2-3 of your current chapters. Keep things simple. End each chapters with a hook so that readers don't drop.
2. You should write the story with a different approach. Instead of writing it like a script, write it like a noble. This will keep readers immersed. (I know man. Changing writer style when you have already come this far in the story can be hard. But believe me: doing so would be great-- at least this is what I believe.]
I believe by fixing these two things your story will improve a lot, readers will enjoy it even more.
[Sorry for my bad English.]
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