Shadow In Your Mind
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Description
Suzie Yap regretted being a mother that neglected her daughter. Her inattention was at fault for not knowing where her daughter was when the apocalypse spread near their home, and when she finally knew, it was way too late.Charles Wong regretted not returning home often in the name of work and was separated far away from his family during the apocalypse outbreak. His wife hated him after they reunited, blamed them for their daughter’s death.With zombies crawling around the surface of the earth, attacking humans, and spreading the virus, humankind was at the risk of extinction. Suzie and Charles were given a chance to return back to ten years ago by a person with the power to manipulate time, sending their soul back to an hour before the outbreak started near their home.They got the opportunity to save their daughter!But the main character of this novel is Wong Xue Guo, the daughter of the time travelers that was supposed to be dead but finally got the chance to survive past a paragraph. Read this novel from Wong Xue Guo’s perspective, who was puzzled by her parent’s sudden display of affection towards her, and fighting for their survival.
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Choco Lily
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 42
- Views
- 28,257
Chapters(46 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- BedwigRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The grammar is okay, with only minor spelling and punctuation. The author also sometimes use the wrong word, such as using past tense when talking about present tense, etc.
The story is pretty good, the methods of power-gaining differing from your usual zombie novel.
The style is alright, too. The style gives off a distinct CN translated novel. The pacing is fine too.
The characters are slightly shallow, the MC contracticting herself at times. Maybe the characters gain more depth later in the story, but for now they seem pretty 2D.
My only bone to pick with this story is that the people seem to accept the virus a bit too easily, going along with it after some moments of sudden panic.