Shadow In Your Mind
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Suzie Yap regretted being a mother that neglected her daughter. Her inattention was at fault for not knowing where her daughter was when the apocalypse spread near their home, and when she finally knew, it was way too late.Charles Wong regretted not returning home often in the name of work and was separated far away from his family during the apocalypse outbreak. His wife hated him after they reunited, blamed them for their daughter’s death.With zombies crawling around the surface of the earth, attacking humans, and spreading the virus, humankind was at the risk of extinction. Suzie and Charles were given a chance to return back to ten years ago by a person with the power to manipulate time, sending their soul back to an hour before the outbreak started near their home.They got the opportunity to save their daughter!But the main character of this novel is Wong Xue Guo, the daughter of the time travelers that was supposed to be dead but finally got the chance to survive past a paragraph. Read this novel from Wong Xue Guo’s perspective, who was puzzled by her parent’s sudden display of affection towards her, and fighting for their survival.
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Choco Lily
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 42
- Views
- 28,257
Chapters(46 total)
- Chapter 44 - Aren't you supposed to worship your own father?Dec 13, 2022
- Chapter 43 - Destroy it if I could not keep it?Nov 28, 2022
- Chapter 42 - Everything is a gambleNov 25, 2022
- Arc 2 Penang Island [prologue]Nov 16, 2022
- Chapter 41 - Request for a meeting with His LordshipMay 3, 2022
- Chapter 40 - Do you still want to follow me?May 3, 2022
- Chapter 39 - Mimic the actions of the good people to dub peopleMay 3, 2022
- Chapter 38 - What a cold-hearted familyMay 3, 2022
- Chapter 37 - But her father does not want to act the script with herMay 3, 2022
- Chapter 36 - Check for bite marksMay 3, 2022
- Chapter 35 - Hit the bullseyeMay 3, 2022
- Chapter 34 - Why are you so afraid of a small, weak, and pink butterfly?May 3, 2022
- Chapter 33 - Normal for us to not trust a quack's wordsJul 26, 2021
- Chapter 32 - Their gaze was actually weighing down on her conscienceJul 21, 2021
- Chapter 31 - Never again favoured an outsiderJul 19, 2021
- Chapter 30 - Don't you have a spine?Jul 15, 2021
- Chapter 29 - You can discard him if it threatens your lifeJul 12, 2021
- Chapter 28 - The foretold disease might be those zombiesJul 10, 2021
- Chapter 27- Don't poke a young man's confidenceJul 5, 2021
- Chapter 26 - Are they really your bodyguards?Jun 30, 2021
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Community Reviews(1)
- BedwigRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The grammar is okay, with only minor spelling and punctuation. The author also sometimes use the wrong word, such as using past tense when talking about present tense, etc.
The story is pretty good, the methods of power-gaining differing from your usual zombie novel.
The style is alright, too. The style gives off a distinct CN translated novel. The pacing is fine too.
The characters are slightly shallow, the MC contracticting herself at times. Maybe the characters gain more depth later in the story, but for now they seem pretty 2D.
My only bone to pick with this story is that the people seem to accept the virus a bit too easily, going along with it after some moments of sudden panic.