Schism

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How does a friendship die?Does it wilt like a flower with no water?Will it litter a field with dead bodies from a slaughter?Does it stain a land in red?or feast like a maggot in the dead?Maybe it ignites a change in the way we see?Or is it the way it's supposed to be?*This will be a primarily be a slice of life historical story.SUPER PRESTIGIOUS MEGA CLUB I AM APART OF!The Order of Phantasmal Architects

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
edge363

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Rating
4.6/ 5.0
Followers
9
Views
4,903

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • FreshPrinceofRRRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Well the beginning so far is interesting. Definitely not your run of the mill story on this site which is a huge plus since I enjoy original stories. The historical aspect is also nice since it's something I enjoy, especially the period this is set in (Industrial Revolution). There was a few typos in it but they're negligible. Grammar is on point and the MC is interesting. Can't wait to see where you take this!
  • Monsoon117Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The characters really jump from the page.  I also enjoyed the childish wonder in chapter two. At that age everything seems to matter. Hope the authur doesn't drop this.
    Another interesting aspect of the story is the setting. Early industrialization is a turbulent time in history, so exploring the period allows for easy wells of drama to draw from. Keep it up me dear fellow.