Reborn in the Mist

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Jason knew how he was going to die next. He's been Yagura for a month now and there's a Tailed-Beast living inside him, he knew how he was going to die next.Nobody wants to die, not even those that have done it before. Navigating the world as Yagura Karatachi, Elite Jounin of Kirigakure and Jinchuriki of the Three Tailed Beast would be dangerous enough on its own but as a Kage-candidate for Fourth Mizukage, he's far too attractive for the likes of Obito and Madara to ignore.The true Yagura is destined for a near decade under Obito's genjutsu and his village the piggybank of the Akatsuki's plans. He can't let that happen andnot just because he's caught up in it now.***Allo, just wanna say this fanfic is my second go at envisioning a character in the position of supreme power; Kage. As Kages don't regularly do missions and violence often comes to them instead, there will be fewer fight scenes until Yagura/Jason begin to face the big threat to the Shinobi world. As such I'll mostly be exploring what *right* decisions Kirigakure could have taken and the challenges to those decisions post 3rd shinobi war, as well as trying to pre-empt Obito's Akatsuki with the current Kages; Onoki, Ay, Rasa, and Hiruzen/Minato.As an aspect of the fic, it will be very Yagura/Kiri-centric with other villages and characters having interlude chapters in between. I am taking this route because, well, it's interesting and I want to discover more of what Kirigakure and its Legendary Swordsmen could have been.Anyway, hope you enjoy.

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Status: Ongoing
Year: 2024
Author: Books_Will_Be

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 527
Views: 471,716

What readers say about Reborn in the Mist

“Is a very good fanfic, with realistic characters, decisions and scenery, the MC is strong, but isn't OP as a lot of readers of webnovel like, so if you came to this fanfic expecting a OP MC with a harem of mindless moppets, and a MC genius in quantum physic…”
SkramsaRoyal Road5.0 / 5
“As pointed by other review the beginning isn't the best, as someone pointed out it can be confusing at time, but the author improve a lot the further you get into the story and it get less confusing, so I would suggest giving it a fair try. When it come to…”
LokumiRoyal Road4.5 / 5

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SkramsaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Is a very good fanfic, with realistic characters, decisions and scenery, the MC is strong, but isn't OP as a lot of readers of webnovel like, so if you came to this fanfic expecting a OP MC with a harem of mindless moppets, and a MC genius in quantum physics and 40years of experience being a ruler before the reincarnation, then this isn't your story.
But, if you are like me who is tired of those kind of MC, whom seems like they use their plot armor to bend the wills of the characters and even bend the reality (like expecting that to use the kagebushin you just needs to make that cross), then this is one of few fanfic that you would encounter like that in this platform (refering to webnovel).
PD: i really would like the updates were more consistent, but i guess irl stuff had made it inconsistent.
LokumiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
As pointed by other review the beginning isn't the best, as someone pointed out it can be confusing at time, but the author improve a lot the further you get into the story and it get less confusing, so I would suggest giving it a fair try.
When it come to grammar and such I didn't see many mistake.
AstrowoudRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I don't often read fan-fiction, although I've been on a bit of rampage as of late in the genre. Naruto fan-fiction is often... difficult to pull of. The Naruto-verse is incredibly big, with absolutely horrific power-scaling and more plot-holes than the Bible.
This fiction did an incredibly difficult thing, yet also smart, it decided to take on a moment before Naruto was born, yet is in line-ish with the lore. While also focussing on one of the more inconsequencial villages in the series. This, however, is also it's weakest point.
While the Author does it's best to describe the village, names are thrown out there, abilites, etc. And somehow we're supposed to know. This is one of those fan-fics that forced me to have the wiki open, and I read the entire manga. The author would do well to explain a bit more. When a specifick type of jutsu-user exists, explain what that jitsu is and does. We are informend of the seven-tails, who is it? We hear names, like those of blablabla the Salamander or something like that. It's just to confusing, the author would do well to change a few of those descriptions.
The grammar seems spot-on, although I'm not a native speaker either. The author took an interesting direction with the reïncarnation schtick. Choosing to jump in the character, instead of being born in it. There is more behind how they did it, but I think it's better if you read that for yourself.
One of the weakest parts of the story are the fight scenes, but this is no surprise - Naruto fight scenes are notoriously inconcistent, luckily the fight scenes are far and in-between.
I myself like multiple P.O.V.'s. and to my dissapointment there are very few of them, the ones that are there are good though.
Another point of praise is the way it reads once you get past the fact that for some things you might need the wiki. It is incredibly smooth, I binged it in a single day without having the feeling that I got tired of reading it.
I would really recommend everybody who already h
Salvodoc99Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Nel complesso, la storia mi piace davvero molto. Sono una fan di questa fanfiction da molto tempo. Quando ho iniziato a seguirla aveva solo una novantaesima serie di capitoli e guarda dov'è arrivata adesso. Bene, iniziamo con la recensione.
Stile: 4/5 stelle. Mi piace molto lo stile di scrittura della storia. È molto incalzante, ogni capitolo si legge velocemente ed è davvero un piacere. Il motivo per cui non gli do 5 stelle è semplicemente perché, a mio parere, ci sono molti capitoli che si leggono freneticamente; li divori, ma una volta finiti, hai la sensazione che manchi qualcosa e ti chiedi: "È questo?".
In sostanza, è molto chiaro e scorrevole. Non intendo questo come una critica, al contrario. Mi piace molto, e solo questa sensazione soggettiva che a volte mi assale mi impedisce di dargli il massimo dei voti.
Trama: 5/5 stelle. Questo è il punto forte della fanfiction. Prende il mondo su cui si basa e lo espande magnificamente. Sembra davvero di leggere uno spin-off piuttosto che una fanfiction. È davvero piacevole come cambiano i punti di vista e, con ogni cambiamento, si aggiunge un nuovo elemento al mondo. Non voglio rivelare spoiler, ecco perché mi è difficile spiegare il concetto. Spero basti dire che è una storia così interessante che quando ti sei presa una pausa di un mese senza dire nulla, stavo per scrivere a RR per chiedere che fine avessi fatto.
Grammatica: 5/5 stelle. Non c'è assolutamente nulla di cui lamentarsi. Se riesco a divorare i capitoli, è anche perché sono scritti in modo grammaticalmente impeccabile e non devo mai tornare indietro per capire qualcosa. Davvero ottimo.
Personaggi: 4/5 stelle. Questo punteggio si basa su una media che ho calcolato. Ci sono molti personaggi valutati con 5 stelle, ma altrettanti con solo 3 stelle.
Purtroppo, questo dipende dalle scelte dell'autore. Tutti i personaggi di cui sceglie di mostrarci il punto di vista sono scritti molto bene. Ci mostra i loro pensieri, a volte persino i loro dubbi e i loro errori
betoRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This story is surprisingly good, I came with no expectations whatsoever (fan fic) and was pleasantly surprised in turn. The style steadily improves as the story advances.
The mayor flaw this story has, is that very little is explained. I know it is a fanfic but come on! I don't know who everybody is, what all the weapons or tools are named, in general more background terminology could be explained so that any casual reader can get on with it. The first few chapters are horrible to read for someone who is not an expert in the naruto world.
MarxismiskeyRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
I will be honest. This is story is unsatisfying and unpleasant. For a long while you will fell no progress or even when there is it weightless because it's not shown enough. Kagura/Jason is strong but somehow so weak. He is also a wimp I don't know how a character who is so strong can even be boring. The political battle as one reviewer pointed out is not even entertaining but infuriating. To make political battle engaging the main character has to be smart. But this one give fools a run for their money. This story has the potential to be really good but the action the author took ruined any chances it may get.
ThunderBolt1Royal Road
★ 1.0
Mediocre political battles, no real weight to any of their actions and the faux battle between jason and yogurt boy is some sort of stalling tactic maskerading as a struggle because theirs no real plot or way to move the story along.
I looked ahead thinking that maybe the writing and the faux plot gets better but nope. Just more of the same.
I don't expect the mc to be an absolute genius but common sense would dictate some sort of understanding. Example: complaining about alot of paperwork, other kage duties and training to do when he has more than enough chakra to make some clones, especially shadow clones
It really shows that the MC really isn't thinking at all.