Reborn as a Holy Obelisk
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Description
Caau -- not to be confused with the bovine -- is reborn. A second chance at life... isn't that nice?
Only problem is he's an immobile piece of stone with seemingly no ability to effect the world even two feet in front of him beyond making it slightly warmer for a couple seconds. That, and a strange ability he can't get to work called [ Bless I ].
Yet when he helps -- or attempts to help -- a group of people that come his way, he quickly finds that he's not quite just 'a piece of stone', but something much, much larger.
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Expectations: A Dungeon Core story with a unique religion-building aspect. A highly in-depth LITRPG battle system including teamplay as a major component. An interesting world full of various powers that might take an interest in the MC's unique properties.
Occasional A.I Art
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- R. K. Winters
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 153
- Views
- 29,789
Chapters(20 total)
- 20. I Command It.Nov 20, 2023
- 19. Gorrokor Is Now A Dungeon? And What The Hell Is A Dungeon Contract?Nov 19, 2023
- 18. A Requiem For The Lunar Blood... And A Warhorn For The Rescue Operation.Nov 18, 2023
- 17. The Geyser-Basin And The Tyrant Of GorrokorNov 17, 2023
- 16. WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO, ADMINSITRATOR?Nov 15, 2023
- 15. Yes, Kid! Beat Him Up! To Your Heart's Content! Here, I'll Even Make It Better For You.... whatNov 14, 2023
- 14. Oh My God There Are Too Many God Damn Pop-ups! What Is This, A Boomer Computer?Nov 14, 2023
- 13. The Avatar Wishes to Speak To Me. I Have No Vocal Cords. How The Hell Do I Do This?Nov 13, 2023
- 12. The First Fight of the Guardian Squad... Oh And Arden! Don't Forget The Roid-Kid. Oops.Nov 13, 2023
- 11.. The Vampires and The Werewolves are here... what is this, fucking Twilight? Wait... what's thatNov 12, 2023
- 10. The Guardian Squad Has Come To Town And They're Not Here To Play Any Other Game Than Winning.Nov 10, 2023
- 9. There Is A West And I Am Going There Now... Or My Guardians Are, I Can't Move!Nov 10, 2023
- 8. A Realm War? That Seems Bad... Is That Bad? I Think That's Bad... Not Sure Though, Could Be Good?Nov 9, 2023
- 7. The Obelisks First Expedition Also I Have Friends Now (They're Just Like Me(Made out of stone))Nov 8, 2023
- 6. Well Now I Have A Guardian // Arden LockwoodNov 8, 2023
- 5. There's Someone Else Inside Me And Now She's **** But Now I Have A Guardian So It's A Net Gain!Nov 7, 2023
- 4. What The Fuck Is An Abyssal-Blood And Why Is It Knocking On My Stone DoorNov 6, 2023
- 3. I Would Bless The Rains Down In The Deep Dark Cave But There Are NoneNov 5, 2023
- 2. They're Inside Me... Waiting To EscapeNov 4, 2023
- 1. Have You Ever Experienced Physical Pain From Boredom?Nov 3, 2023
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Community Reviews(2)
- CauldronRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I am extremely invested so far, the plot is still very much in its early phases - but the stage has been set and the actors cast. The characters seem motivated and the antagonists are interesting from a character design perspective. It definitely suffers from the main character lacking much agency, though it is fairly clearly stated that this will change over time. They do seem interesting and I generally like the interactions between Cauu and the Admin (though i will admit the admin grated for a brief moment). Arden seems a little too mature to me, seems 15+ than just turned 13 - having a degree of logic and stoicness that feels achronistic to his character - perhaps a dedicated interlude or two demonstrating the period between him entering and leaving the dungeon would allieviate this. I also wish the dialogue was more fleshed out but thats something that comes with experience as an author, it does feel like the rigid focus on Cauu with only a paragraph or so each other major character doesnt do the story justice. All in all its an extremely solid start and I will be following along if the author continues posting, with my major critique being that there needs to be a more time developing the characters both within and the end of each climax
- KaedynRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I am interested to see where this goes and a decent start, the system being annoying is a good touch, because if I was stuck with a person for 5 years. I would be a dick to them as well. And finally I wonder what type of creature he will create.