Ranesairan - For The Greatest [Act 2 Out Full]

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Description

The island of Ranesairan has been transported to another world by forces unknown. The people — riddled by their situation — scramble hastily in order to stabilize the situation and keep it from erupting in an instant conflict. Forced to float its own integrity on a twig, the island now has to keep itself from thrashing the foreign world it is in, made to mend relations with the new continent at its east doorstep, while also bracing for events unpredictable and on a scale far beyond their scope.

Expect slower updates, as the chapters are long and take time to proofread ideally.

The ONLY platforms that this work is officially being posted on:Quotev, Wattpad, Royal Road, Tapas.

All of which are posted by Qertucic accounts, any other accounts that post this work, that are also not Qertucic are both not legit and uncool.

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Cover Artist:deathkell__ (twitch)

First Fanart Artists:Ryo Hoshikasa (twitch)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Qertucic

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 3
Views: 1,487

Chapters(10 total)

What readers say about Ranesairan - For The Greatest [Act 2 Out Full]

“I'll start with the positives! It's obvious that this book has a lot of passion put in it. The world feels alive and the characters as well. They're all thought out and they all have their own dramas and turmoils. The world itself seems to have very good ru…”
VopseaRoyal Road3.5 / 5

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VopseaRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I'll start with the positives!
It's obvious that this book has a lot of passion put in it. The world feels alive and the characters as well. They're all thought out and they all have their own dramas and turmoils. The world itself seems to have very good rules that it works off of which makes for a believable universe overall.
Chapter titles were very whimsically worded.
The usage of faster paced dialogue by having a snippy back and forth was really enjoyable to see. I love it when writers do that to imply a sense of urgency.
And now some things I didn't particularly enjoy. Some of these may be personal nitpicks or due to my own tastes so do with the critique what you will!
The book could use more 'show' rather than 'tell'. Characters got introduced and then they were given a brief summary on their looks. This summary was at times intertwined well with the story, other times it felt like it could've gone better. An example I can give is from the first chapter: "A young man dressed in a cloak over a leather vest, equipped with a satchel and a belt of vials was running across the field of tall, dry, golden grass." || I would suggest intertwining his appearance through actions: "The young man ran through the field of tall, dry, golden grass. His cloak fluthering behind him, leather vest tightening around his torso with each breath. Steps accompanied by the clanking of vials and whatever other items within his satchel." (off the top of my head) As well as : "In the head of her excellency, a parallel monologue continued by itself." . Let the reader figure out the parallel's, no need to spell it out.
I feel like I couldn't place this book during a time period. My best guess is that we're talking medieval but the dialogue felt out of place on many occassions.
I know that fanfictions use the '~' key for various purposes but I found it to be a little out of place in something that aims to be more like a proper book. This is just a nitpick, however. It wasn't TOO bothersome b