Particle God [LitRPG]

Self-Published

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Description

As an intern, I saw the advancement of humankind as I and others witnessed the power of the god particle in action. I was doing maintenance around the accelerator when I saw something shiny inside the tubes. That's my last memory as Seth.

Now that I am reborn and have become a newborn god, my name is Hadro. The god of particles.

note from Author: this is the second release, because I didnt edit and proofread my works AND didnt record any important figures I got overwhelmed and decided to rewind and read & record everything that needed to be recorded. anyways, have a good time reading.

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2026
Author: Ohtep

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 367
Views: 2,110

Chapters(12 total)

What readers say about Particle God [LitRPG]

“This is so it has world building a god that actually focus on its civilization an actually realistic power system that makes the mc op from 1 single skill an actually logical and smart mc either way good novel a rare hidden gem not to mention there are bare…”
Imthebest69Royal Road5.0 / 5
“The first amazing thing about it is he actually feels like a god and not a powerful guy. He cannot interact with the physical world and bas to mske others do things for him. and I love that it makes things interesting. Second thing is the characters they ar…”
shaunwinsorRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(6)

Imthebest69Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is so it has world building a god that actually focus on its civilization an actually realistic power system that makes the mc op from 1 single skill an actually logical and smart mc either way good novel a rare hidden gem not to mention there are barely any grammar mistakes and characters too they are fleshed out not some too dimensional people where they are all evil or all good while we still have little interaction with the other gods its looking good so far
shaunwinsorRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The first amazing thing about it is he actually feels like a god and not a powerful guy. He cannot interact with the physical world and bas to mske others do things for him. and I love that it makes things interesting.
Second thing is the characters they are so diverse and lovable. So are better then others but that's just inevitable. But most of them have something to like.
RedWolfXYZRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I love this book I hope that you create more chapters that show the amazing story of the character but their is something I would like to ask do you make one chapter a week and I want to ask if their will be a big time skip or will It take more time until the invasion ark
Operation TrebuchetRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This story is about a person who became a god. He uses a system to share power with his people. A bit of civilization building and tech uplift ontop of using a system to bestow powers and skills. If you like systems and tech uplift, this story may be right up your ally.
GodackRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
While I like the story overall, the grammar being inconsistent takes away from a lot of development. The use of the English language varies between chapter and sometimes words are spelled according to Brittish English while the rest of the story is written more like an American form of English.
The concept of this whole story is something I enjoy reading about with a lot of world building. Only the finer details get lost because of the inconsistent grammar.
The story is slowly working to something more and I've noticed the grammar increasing in quality but the flow of sentences feels off. Sometimes the sentences just feel choppy and I'd recommend a second opinion from someone else or thoroughly combing through what you've written. With the help of a grammar software.
Besides the grammar, the story is fine and very open ended. There is plenty of room for creativity.
But the characters feel pre-written, if that is how you could describe it. It sort of makes you feel that everything doesn't matter what happens to the village. That everything anyone does is just for the sake of the main character. This doesn't make them feel like individuals that can have character development.
bluewin4Royal Road
★★ 2.0
Maybe the later chapters are better but the grammer is painful in the first few.
The idea is interesting and I want to read more, but the sentence structure is awkward and hard to parse at time. Lots of repeated statements and incorrect word order, not to mention a number of odd phrasings of idioms that imply the author isn't a native English speaker. There are also a couple homophones scattered throughout. Pacing is also offkilter