Mystic Beast's Journey

Self-Published

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Description

To make things clear, this is my first-time writing; feel free to correct my spelling mistakes. Originally made on scribblehub.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------His day started out terrible only to get worse by being crushed by ruble. Now reborn as a young female wolf he now she must navigate this new world where the strong thrive and the weak parish all while trying to figure out how this collar appeared around her neck.

What's a young wolf to do? Grow stronger.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
blaze_master100

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICGENDER BENDERNON-HUMAN LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.2/ 5.0
Followers
79
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74,788

Chapters(78 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • NexisRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I think it would be Important to tell you what to expect from the Story. If you would know that bevore reading i am sure the Story would be higher rated. I can only talk about that part i was reading.
    The Story is about an overpowert cute Main Charakter. The Charakters are verry emotional.
    Best would be to make an example for better understanding. You could compare this Story like you would Familie movie to an Action movie. Specially when you compare the Charakter traits of that different genere.
    This is a Story where the Charakters are overly emotional drawn, and i am also sure it should not be total realistic Story. Same you can say about the animation Movie "Arielle the little Mermaid". You hardly could compare that to the movie "The Terminator" or "Avatar".
    And i think the Autor did a good job with the characters and deserves a higher rating for this Story.
  • DamoncalserRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I'm not usually one to write reviews. However, I thought much like the author, I'd give a shot.
    So far, all I have read is the prologue, and chapter 1. The reason I'm writing this now, is so I don't over think the whole thing. That said. My first impression is that the is a very early draft. To much speech, not enough description. The most we got was the King's info dump and the blessing descriptions.
    We have no idea what the school, the castle, MC's location, or even half the characters look like. Though I do think this could be an interesting story and will follow along. And agian... this is all just chapter 1 impressions. Author did say they were new to writing.
    Final Rate: Let Give It A Chance. Hope I Helped.
    EDIT:
    So I caught up...The use of some punctuation and description would go a long way. But the actual story itself is a great "Imma read while in line" time sink.
  • UbermachtRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    the plot has plenty of potential, it really does, and the book is interesting enough to actually read BUT
    the book lacks detail in every chapter, like watching a movie with your eyes closed, it puts everything on the reader to make assumptions for what's happening and there's pointless 'sound effects' in place of proper details on what's happening
    There's gaps in the plot where things don't make sense or where something could have been much better than what was chosen to fill the space, a violent 'family' that punishes each other by doing things that would traumatize most and shrugging it off like nothing happened
    and all kinds of other weird and senseless actions and scenarios that make this book into something that's almost dumb to read
    Reading it the only reason I kept reading is because I didn't have anything better to read and I have enough of an imagination to fill in the many many holes