Myrr: Reincarnated Timemage Assassin

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“A cute Half-Wraith magic tutor who hugs my worries away and tells me I’m a genius, a loving auntie who beats the way of the assassin into me while guarding me from demons, and a sperm-less uncle who can’t have kids of his own because he gets beaten so bad by said auntie. I…was really messed up in my past life. But with so much help, I think I might be able to smile in this one.

This is a story about beautiful mistakes!”

On Earth, I was a filthy-rich, depressed loner.

I single-handedly bankrupted six casinos using my ability to see the future.

My girlfriend was just using me for my money.

I was just using her to appear normal.

I trusted no one.

Untilthat girlcame.

After I saved her...for some reason, I was reincarnated as a baby in another world.

It seems I'm really good at magic here.

But seeing into the future is a lot tougher in this life.

And even if I can peek a few seconds ahead...

I can't help but ask,

"Why is everyone so freaking strong? I thought all girls were useless gold-diggers!"

But seriously, I think I've been saved by every girl I've met in this world.

My auntie hopes that I become a self-replenishing bank account...err powerful mage.

She's willing to do anything for me, even pay for my education with her retirement money!

Everyone here is so...selfless.

It's really challenging just to survive each day.

Life is way tougher than on Earth...but for some reason...I think I want to smile?

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: MtAlternity

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 419
Views: 306,447

Chapters(136 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

ZedoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I found this story by accident, and I can't believe how good it is, the prologue is extremely well written, the characters feel real, the story is engaging and as far as I can tell the grammar is as good as impeccable.
I'm not good at writing reviews, I just want you to know you have to read this story - especially if it continues as strong as it started.
PrashRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Author does a good job of conveying emotion. It deserves more recognition than its getting. Looking forward to reading more. I find myself invested with the MC and am genuinely rooting for him. So far he’s had it rough, but I’m hoping things will get better. This doesn’t have a tragedy tag so I’m still holding out...
James KohosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Been looking for something new to read and having trouble finding something that can hook me in, but this works. Just binged up to date and really enjoying it.
Wish we knew how he died and how he wound up there, but I suspect that it will be plot relevant later on, which is why we aren't in the know.
Lord_EretharRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This story is one I find extremely enjoyable, and heartwarming. Add to that the excellent grammar and ability to keep the story on track, for the most part, and you have an excellent read. Honestly my only hiccup and the reason I can't give the story a full 5/5 is that the time progression is atrocious. 60 chapters and almost no time has really occurred, and while I can get that there is an aspect to building a characters background, there's only so far you can go without slowly losing an audience's interest.
AgarthaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It a good consent it does state how he is all-powerful but he does get it based on his efforts. Sure he has an op ability but it's not enough to save him from everything, it can still be a good story but can run the change of it just being another op character that no one can touch
designiconRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
What's starts off a little confusing, moves into a little 'the beginning after the end' before finding it's feet, deepening it's lore and becoming something really intriguing if slow moving. The writing flows well and is a wonderful read throughout which dampens some of the glaring issues...
The biggest I think being age vs skill, there are comparisons that fly around about our stalwart hero (who is still just pushing against 8 years) and his peers that makes it hard to get a good feel for what the mean power levels really are.
VoxolRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Going off the title and image I figured this would be a story I would read until I found something else to read during my break at work, after actually getting past the first couple of chapters I was hooked, this became an incredible read.
There isn't much to say without spoiling the story but all the side characters are just great, they feel alive and you just want to read more about them.
Progression is coming along and it always feels like there is more things being planned in the background to add to that sense of mystery.
xcaresRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
To begin with, be warned, this isn't a novel. It's an episodic released anime series in text format.
The characters would really fit in a battle junkie anime. Overblown both in terms of power, appearance and reaction. I mean the "auntie" mentioned could very well be a "One Piece" captain....
World-building is great so far and the plot makes total sense for a quirky anime.
The first few chapters make obvious the author has the ability to go for something a bit more typical but seems to have more fun building up an mc so OP he could eventually kill Goku....
It's a novel for a very specific crowd
Fost_NZRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Books 1 and 2 were very good reads, the latest (Book 3 chapters 80+) is far from it - even the author makes a comment about how the number of readers have fallen off - maybe wrap it up quickly and have Book 4 like the first 2. So Overall I'd read this, but maybe you'll be like me and skimm Book 3, hoping to get to Book 4.
Rating 4/5 - however that is an average as the first 2 books I'd rate 5/5, last one is a 2/5. - because:
a) the plot arc is weird. Myrr's approach to deal with the problem is unlikely to yeild results without a generous amount of plot armour (provided by "the Stranger" - Myrr's revenge should have waited until he could carry out his revenge directly.
b) the interaction between Myrr and (female) is both annoying and childish - thy've supposed to have grown up, why are they still acting like 10 year olds,
c) pacing is really off, too much of each chapter is irrelevant to the story and I am now skim reading just to check if the plot is progressing this chapter or not, in many cases - like the last few (chapters 102 to 105) the "drama" is forced and should have taken half a chapter not 3
d) the dad joke about cheese has taken over the story - it was fun/cute the first time but give it a rest (BTW you might want to research cheese making at least a little bit - most cheese takes months if not years to ripen/age to actually taste good, and the type of cheese is much more about the process and microbes than just finding different herbs.
Sorry auther - rant over - but please go back to writing like the first 2 books, because if Book 3 continues for too much longer and/or Book 4 is the same, I not sure I'll be able to finish reading - and I drop very few books
To other readers, you will enjoy the first 2 books, they are great.
TooHardToReadRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
First: Be warned! You who are deciding, if reading this novel is for you!
It contains vast amounts of cringe. Or so I've been told. No seriously it's there.
We're still in the Prologue, so take everything here with a bucket of salt. (Yes it's a long one)
The Grammar is good (sry not a good judge here)and it's written fluently.
The style feely natural and most characters have some depth to them.(everyone and their grandma has problems xD)
The story so far is hard to pin down. Feels like basebuilding so far.
Character is the same, the reincarnation more of an explanation for giving the MC information instead of an already developed mind.
At certain points I thought really hard where this said comedy is. The cringe isn't as bad as in most animes (no comedy isn't cringe ) and for now it all seems pretty serious. So I'll have to wait, read and eventually edit.
@author: I often heard it's bad that there is no direct commentary function to reviews, so feel free to text me/comment on the latest chapter.