Description

A curious Zorua with amnesia, seeking his past memories. A playful boy with sarcasm, searching for his mother. A serious girl with dignity, thirsting for vengeance on Team Conjure. What do Ramon, Justin, and Ada have in common? Why being lost in the vast Pokemon region of Wizlore, of course!

Taking place in the far distant future, two powers changed society from the Pokemon Trainer Era: Humans, gifted with magical powers to defend themselves. Pokemon, capable of evolving and devolving by will.

These advancements doesn't prevent an ancient evil from lurking within this world. Will our heroes be able to stop them?

(Cover art by OffBased)

(Update: Gonna stop updating this fic on this website due to lack of interest in continuing uploading on here, tbh. I'll keep it up, but if anyone wants to see its continuation, you can find it on fanfic.net, deviantart, thousandsroads, and archive of our own)

What readers say about Magic & Transvolution

“To think I'd ever be reviewing a book about Pokémon. Yes, I dislike the franchise for what it stands for. And no, I didn't base my review on bias. Let's get started. First, it's got a solid hook, Mr. Ramon. From the first chapter to the most recent, ya almo…”

Akito B. TakahashiRoyal Road4.0 / 5

Community Reviews(1)

Akito B. TakahashiRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

To think I'd ever be reviewing a book about Pokémon. Yes, I dislike the franchise for what it stands for. And no, I didn't base my review on bias.
Let's get started. First, it's got a solid hook, Mr. Ramon. From the first chapter to the most recent, ya almost got me invested. I say almost because of the strength of your writing.
Ramon's amnesia and confusion, combined with the sudden attack, did create a thrilling start. I also like the detailed elements added to this intriguing world (i.e., Pokémon blood, etc.).
Some areas in the book feel like they could be tightened. Consider streamlining overly descriptive passages or dialogue to keep the pace brisk. Reader preference, but I'd also prefer the MC have his emotions shown more through his actions rather than almost always stating them directly. This will immerse the reader more deeply in his experience.
Apart from that, your tone and vocabulary are not half bad, even if they occasionally sound more mature than his playful personality might suggest.