Madness
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Nate, a boy believed to be insane by his noble family, is declared unfit to inherit his father's place on the throne. Abandoned by everyone he trusted he sets out alone in a world filled with danger around every corner with nothing but the voices in his head to keep him company.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- RebelKami
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 8
Chapters(9 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- AheaelRoyal Road★★★ 2.5The story centering around Nate, so far, has been well laid out. Following his sense of anxiety and confusion is actually quite easy, which for me was a good sign because a bit of empathy here and there is good and all but realism at least to some point needs to be evident and it's definitely in this story.
So with that said, empathy with the characters is one of the strong points so far and next would be battle scenes. They're wonderfully written out if I were to compare it to hundreds of other stories on this site. It's simple and visual. No fancy descriptions, which if you dislike then this certainly will be appealing to you.
Some of the problems are just simple typos and missing commas or fullstops, silly little mistakes. There could be some said for the structure of his writing but I feel it's something that will improve with time.