Local Netizen Elf’s Life In Another World (GL)

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Description

Hanazawa Hanako was a young otaku girl, technically a hikikomori, a degenerate, and a netizen. She died though. (LOL)

So naturally she got yeeted to a fantasy world to save it from the demon king.

When asked what buff she want: ''Just give me the whole Internet then.''

*****Disclaimer: - First time writing.- For fun, mostly.- A light read, for the most part.Artwork: I made it. Well I didn't make it, the AI did.

This story is currently on ScribbleHub and RoyalRoad. If you somehow see this somewhere else, you're tripping. Or I'm tripping. I don't know.

Chapters(349 total)

What readers say about Local Netizen Elf’s Life In Another World (GL)

  • Overall I like it. That being said if one of the following is a deal breaker, I suggest you read something else: Liberal use of the English language (the not proof read kind). Lewd chapters and constant references to sex. Little to no character growth. I su…
    PletterRoyal Road3.5 / 5
  • Overall it's ok'ish, nothing i would read as my main novel, maybe as a break in-between. The writing style feels soul-less. Lots of time jumps in the beginning wich is normally fine but there seems to happen so much in between that isn't really explained, m…
    Nexus_InfinityRoyal Road2.5 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

  • PletterRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Overall I like it.
    That being said if one of the following is a deal breaker, I suggest you read something else:
    Liberal use of the English language (the not proof read kind).
    Lewd chapters and constant references to sex.
    Little to no character growth.
    I suggest it however if you like the following:
    Low amounts of drama.
    Very good pacing.
    A nice variety of situations.
  • Nexus_InfinityRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Overall it's ok'ish, nothing i would read as my main novel, maybe as a break in-between.
    The writing style feels soul-less. Lots of time jumps in the beginning wich is normally fine but there seems to happen so much in between that isn't really explained, more of a "It happened so accept it"
    The story itself started of interesting and strong but feel flat rather fast. Each chapter feels like a repeat of the previous one.
    The character. Not gonna lie, a disappointment. Thought there would be at least some development in some way, nope. None. Character stays the same all day every day. 13 years lived in this world with magic and what not and not a single aspect changed apparently.
    Grammer - Its a mix to be honest. For one there aren't any inherently huge errors, not that I would see them good. For me it just feels like the sentence structure is a mess. It feels and reads like a lot of words where just randomly thrown into the pot and hoped they would sound right.
    Overall I couldn't really recommend this story based on my personal taste and the chapters I've read so far. It feels soul-less, empty and a wasted opportunity.
    If you want to read something in-between novels/books while turning of you're brain, go ahead.
    If you like a detail rich world, a character that actually develops and such - dont.
    this review is biased towards my taste so keep that in mind, I do encourage you to try reading it anyway. Maybe it's something for you. For me at least it isn't.