Legacy of the Damned

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Status

Cancelled

Author

kanadaj

What readers say about Legacy of the Damned

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  WingRoyal Road5.0 / 5

• “I like it so far I'm absoulutley hooked but I feel a need for more setting description instead of this and that happens also the character placement in the story is to my liking Im just waiting for more development to understand him more This story has a lo…”

  dakingkRoyal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(5)

• WingRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

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• dakingkRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I like it so far I'm absoulutley hooked but I feel a need for more setting description instead of this and that happens also the character placement in the story is to my liking Im just waiting for more development to understand him more
  This story has a lot of potental and is the main hook to me with the advancement of time and lost tech and what not but yeah it's good
  To all those who read this I'd recommend reading the prologue
  Keep up the work pretty good so far author
• BullerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Sure, there might not be that many chapters, and some of the writing might not be the greatest in the world, but there aren't that many other stories who does what this one does. Love it.
  Grammar is pretty well-done. No real critisms done. Some sentences might go on for too long or in the wrong way, but the plot itself is good enough for me to ignore it. Good stuff.
  4.5/5
• DoktorPrimatRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  This is a very good fiction, and I really enjoy the feel it is giving. What I really like about it is that you give a reason to as why there is an interface screen instead of using the “game-like world” excuse.
  I will be looking forward to the next chapter!
  Keep up the good work mate!
  -Dok
• ThinkTwiceRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  All the following statements are my own opinion.
  Warning: spoilers.
  It was nice for a first chapter I can’t comment on the character aspect since there is too little to go on but the grammar is excellent.
  Character aspect update!: The star has increased for this one! Yay! This is because you clearly explained why the mc and others are calm in the face of this environment and also further introduced several members of the community and assault team. The interesting characteristics of Mia such as being a strong language user but hinting that it’s because she’s been hurt before is a definite plus!
  Story: So far the story seems unoriginal in terms of how he got there. The ending was nice but sort of predictable as well. But the gaming aspects and zombies add interesting twists which promise the reader more story developments in future updates. I will change this aspect of the review as updates continue.
  Story update!: On the plus side! I very much enjoyed the clear history given from the side of the human, Kyle and I was pleased by how clear the story progressed in terms of introducing the nanobots and the damned. The addition of explaining the calmness of the humans is also good. It still seems unoriginal in terms of content and very straightforward in stating future plot devices and problems which are refreshing but also do not add much re-read value to it since you will most likely remember reading that this was going to happen or be addressed by clues left in earlier chapters(whether this is good or bad is up to you). The star remains unchanged but this is because it needs more chapters to it!
  Style: (i’m going with the guess that this is supposed to be styled as a sci-fi/horror fiction so i’m going from that angle).
  I will obviously change my opinion on this as it updates more but so far this doesn’t deserve to have the horror tag just because it has zombies. It was going great and ready to instill fear into the reader but the installation of the health bar (obvio