Just My Luck/ What could possibly go wrong

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Description

For all of you that know me from before yes it is I. But enough about me, this is not my story.

This is a story about a young man in his early thirties who has how he likes to say bad luck. From a difficult childhood to a even harder life. Donny is a guy who was born in a world similar to our own. But in these word people have powers, these powers might be something simple from chilling water to controlling the weather. But powers are a norm with a everyday occurrence and our man Donny has nothing. A average joe, a simply librarian who like spending his free time gaming and doing DnD gets his life turned upside down after a interesting birthday present... Now lets follow this story of a average man as he gets involved with four women of incredible fame and power who are not what they seem.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: Depore

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 222
Views: 84,781

Chapters(24 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

DragonMonkRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Oh how them nat ones hurt. Nat one on the original story being taken down sure has broken my soul, but then the ever beautiful Nat 20 rolled into my lap as I found out the story only migrated under some reworking!! The humor has improved, and while the base beats of the story are the same from its original concept, great amazing read BTW, I do still enjoy this to its fullest. I can't wait to see what comes next!!
NyxtierRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a wonderful story that unfolds beautifully with new goofy story around every corner, followed by deep, heavy emotions from the characters as they show more of themselves. Foreshadowing in every chapter makes each re-read even more interesting as you notice little tidbits. Great for introducing to that one friend so that you can share a few inside jokes with.
Redcoat2Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
...... At least twice I had to stop reading because I was laughing so hard!
I couldn't stop reading, every moment was done so well. I could picture everything with out a single break in what is being pictured in my mind and what I'm reading.
I can't, just bloody can't wait for more of this story!
Sam4005Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well-written, fun story. Characters are fun, goofy, and interesting. The story and characters interactions are a little unrealistic and over the top, but it's done for comedic effect, and it's hilarious. Despite being comedic, it's engaging, and you want to know more about the characters and where it's going. Give it a go and you wont regret it.
ArkoRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The characters are well-written, the story is quite good so far and it is hilarious. so far the world seems quite interesting but that has not held the story back as there is some intrigue there. The only downside is the grammar, there are lots of typos so it can be a bit jarring which is why it does not have 5 stars but overall if you can look past a few typos it is an outstanding story
WickyWickRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Been awhile since I've read the original fanfic of this story, but I did enjoy it and this remake of it. Aside from bad grammar here and there, the story's plot was very engaging and written well enough for me to be hooked and had me read till the very end to see what crazy things would happen next. Was amused with the interactions between the characters, but at times disagreed with what they did or found it unrealistic/aggravating, hence only 3 stars. But beyond that the story has potential and was impressed with the author making his own world based on the fandom that started it all, making it into his own image.
Despite having it's flaws this story is something to recommend for anyone tired of boring OP protags, having a main character that has struggles in life that anyone can relate to.