Juggernaut: The Crafters Legacy- a LitRPG

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Description

The 10,000 Heroes have been chosen and the end of the world is near. Will Daniel, one hero among a sea of adversaries, be able to stand against the tide and fight for the survival of humanity or will his skills and preparations not be enough for the incoming storm. He can't be sure, but what he does know is that through his own strength and the strength of friends he meets along the way he will certainly try. Through strength of arm and skill in crafting he will fight this new foe that threatens to wipe humanity off the face of Earth once and for all.

Winnerof the 2021 writathon challenge

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: m1tch3l

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 202
Views: 38,260

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Randall Spencer JonesRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I have really enjoyed this book so far and I am really looking forward to more. The story is quite fun and it's not just running through enemies over and over again, there is some pretty good world building. There are some editing errors though, that look like autocorrect and that makes me think the author is using an iPad to write, instead of Word which would catch the errors.
CH3CH2COOHRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The idea itself was great, but the execution of the said idea was decidedly lacking.
Style: While not brilliant, it was certainly readable on most parts - if not for the frequent grammatical errors.
Grammar: It was lacking. While I am by no means perfect at this either, a few grammatical errors in every paragraph was simply a bit too much for me. This was made even worse by the fact that some parts were rendered practically unreadable by said errors.
Plot: I have only (as of 17/12/2021) read three chapters, so I am in no position to judge. However, given what I have read, I would say that it is only acceptable.
Character: Again, I have only read three chapters, but I feel the characters lack depth.
The story may improve as it goes on, and if I continue to read this story, any change, positive or otherwise, will be reflected in this review.