Invincible

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The strong are lonesome. Overcoming the loneliness pushes you to stand invincible at the top. Pro-disciple of the Shaolin Temple on Earth, Huang Xiaolong was reborn into a Martial Spirit world, carrying Hua Xia’s secret knowledge, the Body Metamorphose Scripture. In a Martial Spirit world, only those with Martial Spirit are able to train in battle qi and become a warrior. Huang Xiaolong – born with a heaven-defying rare Martial Spirit – was mistakenly taken for common variant Martial Spirit during the awakening ceremony conducted by the tribe and thus sidelined. However, Huang Xiaolong with his common “variant” Martial Spirit again, and again displayed unnatural talent, defeating geniuses, shocking the clan and the entire Martial Spirit World

Chapters(18 total)

What readers say about Invincible

  • I am enjoying this story! It is a little disjointed in the telling so far but it is early in the plot so hopefully this will be resolved. Some definite grammar issues but nothing that some editing/proofreading would not fix. I am Looking forward to ware you…
    JohnDelvfarRoyal Road5.0 / 5
  • I write this when the story reach Chapter 7. So far I find this story really interesting. The genre isn't the usual to find around here, but perhaps that's what make it refreshing. Up to chapter 7, there is no repetition in the plot, which is quite easy to…
    HanmengRoyal Road4.5 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

  • JohnDelvfarRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I am enjoying this story! It is a little disjointed in the telling so far but it is early in the plot so hopefully this will be resolved. Some definite grammar issues but nothing that some editing/proofreading would not fix.
    I am Looking forward to ware you take this story! Please keep up the good work!
    JohnDelvfar
  • HanmengRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I write this when the story reach Chapter 7.
    So far I find this story really interesting. The genre isn't the usual to find around here, but perhaps that's what make it refreshing.
    Up to chapter 7, there is no repetition in the plot, which is quite easy to find when reading other story here in royalroad. Most of the story here, on character development aspect, is more focused about the aspect of leveling up, getting stronger, get more skills, etc. While the personality of their characters, its already set on a stone.
    In this one, it seemed the writer focused on something else. Can't say much since the story haven't reached that far. But from the way the writer, set each of characters background, I'm anticipating how they would evolve.
    Since the writer spend much time to carefully draw each characters, the plot moved slowly compared to other story in royalroad, but so far each characters in it is interesting and I don't find myself bored when I read about them.
    Hope more people will find this story and it earn respectable place among other stories.