Into the world that I made
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Description
Waking up, I was quite surprised to find myself inside my fictional creation.
Unfortunately, this place is the hellhole I personally designed. To survive here, I need strength.
Well then, I’ll become the strongest and enjoy my new life.
The world has changed? Bring it on! Things will be more entertaining from now on.
The hero will fail to save the world? Fine, I’ll do it myself.
My world, my rule.
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Reader Disclaimer:
- I'm not a native English speaker. If there is anything wrong anywhere, please let me know
- Any criticism is highly appreciated
- Hope you enjoy~
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- kernel42
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 58
- Views
- 84,465
Chapters(147 total)
- Chapter 26 - The change (2)Jun 3, 2022
- Chapter 25 - The change (1)Jun 1, 2022
- Chapter 24 - Impromptu surgery (2)May 30, 2022
- Chapter 23 - Impromptu surgery (1)May 27, 2022
- Chapter 22 - Change of plan (2)May 25, 2022
- Chapter 21 - Change of plan (1)May 23, 2022
- Chapter 20 - Monthly occasion (2)May 20, 2022
- Chapter 19 - Monthly occasion (1)May 18, 2022
- Chapter 18 - Choice of weapon (2)May 16, 2022
- Chapter 17 - Choice of weapon (1)May 13, 2022
- Chapter 16 - A new opportunityMay 11, 2022
- Chapter 15 - Welcome to school (5)May 9, 2022
- Chapter 14 - Welcome to school (4)May 6, 2022
- Chapter 13 - Welcome to school (3)May 4, 2022
- Chapter 12 - Welcome to school (2)May 2, 2022
- Chapter 11 - Welcome to school (1)Apr 29, 2022
- Chapter 10 - Towards the centreApr 27, 2022
- Chapter 9 - PartnersApr 25, 2022
- Chapter 8 - The deal is signedApr 22, 2022
- Chapter 7 - Follow meApr 20, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- ShipTeaserRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5When reading the prologue i got a real 'The Novel's Extra' vibe, though the story itself goes in way other directions.
The tale itself is an interesting twist on a 'reborn in a novel you wrote' story, having the memory loss makes it unique in regards to the variations i've read. As a character John can feel a little bit empty, but that makes sense due to the memory issues, and when he does act on his emotions it's certainly explosive.
Characters are excellent, and i particularly like the dynamics he has with Faye, another character who ends up deeper than first appearence.
The other characters seem well fleshed out in general and easy to distinguish, which is definitely a strength here. Even the hatebale characters are good (though i do hate 'em indeed!)
Grammar-wise, no real issues, just a few of what i'd term 'auto-correct errors' where a wrong word has slipped in here or there. The writing is clean and gets across what needs to be done, and the action is likewise visaulisable.
The world is consistent with itself and is one i'd like to know more about. Overall i'm really looking forward to seeing the character dynamic blossom and where the story goes from here.