Into the world that I made
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Description
Waking up, I was quite surprised to find myself inside my fictional creation.
Unfortunately, this place is the hellhole I personally designed. To survive here, I need strength.
Well then, I’ll become the strongest and enjoy my new life.
The world has changed? Bring it on! Things will be more entertaining from now on.
The hero will fail to save the world? Fine, I’ll do it myself.
My world, my rule.
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Reader Disclaimer:
- I'm not a native English speaker. If there is anything wrong anywhere, please let me know
- Any criticism is highly appreciated
- Hope you enjoy~
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- kernel42
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 58
- Views
- 84,465
Chapters(147 total)
- Chapter 46 - The first tournament (7)Jul 21, 2022
- Chapter 45 - The first tournament (6)Jul 20, 2022
- Chapter 44 - The first tournament (5)Jul 19, 2022
- Chapter 43 - The first tournament (4)Jul 18, 2022
- Chapter 42 - The first tournament (3)Jul 15, 2022
- Chapter 41 - The first tournament (2)Jul 14, 2022
- Chapter 40 - The first tournament (1)Jul 13, 2022
- Chapter 39 - Across the expanse (10)Jul 12, 2022
- Chapter 38 - Across the expanse (9)Jul 11, 2022
- Chapter 37 - Across the expanse (8)Jul 8, 2022
- Chapter 36 - Across the expanse (7)Jul 4, 2022
- Chapter 35 - Across the expanse (6)Jul 1, 2022
- Chapter 34 - Across the expanse (5)Jun 27, 2022
- Chapter 33 - Across the expanse (4)Jun 24, 2022
- Chapter 32 - Across the expanse (3)Jun 20, 2022
- Chapter 31 - Across the expanse (2)Jun 17, 2022
- Chapter 30 - Across the expanse (1)Jun 13, 2022
- Chapter 29 - The change (5)Jun 10, 2022
- Chapter 28 - The change (4)Jun 8, 2022
- Chapter 27 - The change (3)Jun 6, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- ShipTeaserRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5When reading the prologue i got a real 'The Novel's Extra' vibe, though the story itself goes in way other directions.
The tale itself is an interesting twist on a 'reborn in a novel you wrote' story, having the memory loss makes it unique in regards to the variations i've read. As a character John can feel a little bit empty, but that makes sense due to the memory issues, and when he does act on his emotions it's certainly explosive.
Characters are excellent, and i particularly like the dynamics he has with Faye, another character who ends up deeper than first appearence.
The other characters seem well fleshed out in general and easy to distinguish, which is definitely a strength here. Even the hatebale characters are good (though i do hate 'em indeed!)
Grammar-wise, no real issues, just a few of what i'd term 'auto-correct errors' where a wrong word has slipped in here or there. The writing is clean and gets across what needs to be done, and the action is likewise visaulisable.
The world is consistent with itself and is one i'd like to know more about. Overall i'm really looking forward to seeing the character dynamic blossom and where the story goes from here.