In the Shadow of God

Self-Published

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When gods fight their shadows can destroy worlds.

Aybram Ryder finds himself in the middle of a godly squabble that shatters everything he had previously held up as laws or truths of reality, as he is suckered into being the champion of a minor god having a little too much fun trying to make him into a galactic warlord. Come join the 'mighty' god, Yros, as he sees where a human can go with just one, or a couple, small pushes, that may or may not be near a cliff.

Please leave a comment if you read my story. Any input will be greatly appreciated.

I will try to keep the creative juices flowing but college has it's difficulties, I will add to and update as I get the chances to. Please comment anything you'd like to see me do or to see happen, it will help a lot in keeping the story going when possible.

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • BlueLightningLCRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    From the prologue and first two chapters I’d say, conceptionally this is a good story, the authors bio says they fell in love with world building and it shows as the ideas are good and background aspects seem well thought out.
    The prologue seems to be the best written part so far as it leans into the world building but the following chapters are given from the perspective of one of the gods watching and talking to the audience like they’re watching.
    The mortal protagonist gets some characterisation through backstory but it’s difficult due to the perspective the story is written in.
    I mostly think the idea is good and would like to see where it goes but does need an edit.