In the Naruto world (1)

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Description

Chris Walker was teleported to the world of Naruto. He didn't die, rather someone or something teleported him there for no apparent reason. (Or did he?)

The world of Naruto doesn't follow the same script as the original Naruto series. The whole world of Naruto is so much different, even though Chris has watched the entire naruto series, it won't help him at all since everything in Naruto is different.

And now Chris has to survive in this new world of Naruto

I do not have any rights to the Naruto or the cover either, this is only a hobby to write fan-fiction light novels.

WARNING: If you hate harem, then this novel isn't for you. There will never be any sexual content in this novel.

And i'll try my best to not let the harem ruin this novel. There are potentially only 5 harem members on it, NO MORE THAN THAT AMOUNT.

And yes, I am sorry for not keeping my word for this novel, and included a harem in it. I didn't want it either, because it means more work for me. But I did a poll and harem won.

I am sorry for that, and please forgive me.

This novel also includes OP mc, for those who don't like OP Mc's. And this also includes light Sasuke and Sakura bashing, only in the early part of the story, but then changes after. And this also includes more characters.

Sincerely, Lodoly.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: DemonGodHiatus

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 674
Views: 826,398

Chapters(114 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

ArrantsauceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Best novel om Royal Road so far
the story is interesting and you want to Get involed in this world and the funny yet proper way the scenes happen. I Also like that the auther is doing polls to SEE What the readers want
Devang_123Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
please continue writing it's great story and better than other fan fic.
TheDarkMistRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Ok first off I would like to say that it's good and I recommend it but
The story is not the best but it is fun to read
The characters can fill one dimension sometimes *Sometimes* not all time (I think one dimension is the word I'm looking for)
The Grammar is ok and style is good
now I will just say that I will be dropping this not because its bad but because of the HAREM that is coming now as of Chapter 15 the only reason I started to read this is because there was no HAREM tag but the author did a poll and the HAREM win which is sad because I don't like HAREM but hey what can I do :{
blahblahblahblahblahRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I want to know more.
I want to read more.
I want to see more.
I want to feel more.
Give us more.
lexRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Let the mc make tsunade bcome his loversss...plssssss..never read novel when tsunade bcom mc loversss
ShinnruRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Well i have to say I'm open mind about any novel i read, and my English suckk!
The story is a little bit to fast, so it's hard to enjoy it. Cuz we jump a lot in the story. MC vey OP in the bad way, i have nothing against OP MC, but it's boring. I have prefer if he had strength from the beginning of the story and take over ( Dying body) someone from anbu division. He can do his mission more easy and we don't need the werid setting we get in the story.
Like how come everyone are so stupid? I mean come on.... everyone trust MC as is natural things to do.
Still, it's not so bad, but i think you (Author) need to rewrite the story. More details is a good things! Don't make him OP to much, let him work hard for it or just make him stronger from the beginning and do some mission so he can get skills.
Anyway, good luck. And i hope you get better in the future.
jonte674Royal Road
★★ 1.5
There are some good points with this story but there a lot of bad too. The top of the list is you've fallen into the 'Mc thinks it's right so every goddamn character thinks so too' which is a shame cuz this had potential. Since the beginnning you've made the characters personality like cardboardboxes and the 'villains' are just an excuse for the MC to act like a worrldclass asshole. My advice, rewrite and this time don't let everything go the MCs way.
TridoxianRoyal Road
★ 0.5
So, uh... Yeah.
This story really is something else. I don't think I've ever read prose this bad in my life - at least not prose that somehow still becomes popular. The author absolutely needs an editor and a rewrite, because reading this has probably given me a brain tumour.
I made through almost three chapters before deciding to look out for my health and giving up. I suggest you don't do the same. Just don't touch it at all.
The author apparently doesn't know how to write conversation. You don't write like this:
"Man, this novel really isn't any good." (me)
"what do you mean, this novel is totally great, I don't even have to use question marks, full stops, or anything, I can just keep going and vomit words like there's no tomorrow" (author)
I mean, really? Run-on sentences that last longer than Forrest Gump's cross-country run, character writing more 2-dimensional than Pac-Man, terrible dialogue, and a "hehe xd" random system that appears once in a while are some of the few things so very wrong with this novel.
I suggest you take a couple of writing classes, scrap this novel, and start over, because I think I may have to sue for damages if this brain tumour develops.
Nika13KRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The character's and stories are so random it just to stupid. The mc I'd super overpowered in truth but he gets such huge nerfs for the plot that he looks like a complete idiot who doesn't know how shit works. Somehow the rinegan can move faster then time and time is in fact faster then the speed of light. Somehow people can just adapt to time being stopped and ignore that it is stopped. You could name an inventory "inventory" for over 60 chapters. The mc I'd a stupid idiot who literally is like a god to this people but is so weak he can't do anything. To give mc a challenge(for plot) you literally make him out to be weak, make some random ass person op and say it's thanks to his KG(kekei genkai). At this point I won't be surprised if ichiraku guy ends up being madara uchihas and kaguyas son, who has eyes of super overpoweredness and gets mind controlled into fucking his daughter to give birth to the god of ninjas who will be the strongest opponent chris has ever faced. Also I'm 99.999999% sure your going to use the bullshit I just said as a future plot and call it story development.
AileronRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Wish fulfillment story from someone who's probably never written anything, and doesn't even try to write well.
Grammar is better than other stories on this site, but still quite bad.
Probably not worth your time.