How to write dumb boys, a struggle
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The first time Hoh Saering saw Shum Deil, he witnessed a one on four fight.That night, Shum Deil got taken away by the police. Later, the academic tyrant transferred schools, leaving behind District II.
The first time they actually got to talk, Deil cursed at him.The two were instantly off to a good start.
The first time Sae’s heart moved, Deil confessed,I want to be with you.Sae opened his eyes and the wind scattered his fears.
One line summary: You made me dare to dream. What I want is you.
cold looking honour student x rebellious geniusor to put it another waycrazy but dedicated flirt x short tempered sweet teaser
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Author notes: A daily life novel. The characters will grow up slowly throughout the story.Real slow burn. Not much drama, nor angst (?) *runs away*
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- little bunny crawling
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 15,927
Chapters(54 total)
- December 30, Wednesday– A New Year (Chapter .9 part 2)Oct 30, 2022
- December 30, Wednesday– A New Year (Chapter .9 part 1)Oct 23, 2022
- December 18, Friday– Was Shum Deil goading him? (Chapter .8)Oct 16, 2022
- December 10, Thursday– The phone (Chapter .7 part 2)Oct 9, 2022
- December 10, Thursday– The phone (Chapter .7 part 1)Oct 2, 2022
- December 9, Wednesday– All happened in a moment (Chapter .6 part 2)Sep 25, 2022
- December 9, Wednesday– All happened in a moment (Chapter .6 part 1)Sep 18, 2022
- November 30, Monday– To that extent? (Chapter .5)Sep 11, 2022
- November 26, Thursday– She didn't need any shielding (Chapter .4)Sep 4, 2022
- November 3, Tuesday– Three people stared at each other (Chapter .3 part 2)Aug 26, 2022
- November 3, Tuesday– Three people stared at each other (Chapter .3 part 1)Aug 21, 2022
- October 26, Monday– Memory surfaced (Chapter .2)Aug 14, 2022
- October 16, Friday– The name on everyone’s lips (Chapter .1)Aug 8, 2022
- Prologue– To be with youAug 3, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- HungryboarRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I enjoyed reading this fiction. The characters all meshed well, with growth and realistic interactions. The slightly sparse style allowed for imagination to fill the space - the old adage of 'less is more' being respected in the best way. That's not to say you're left guessing, as the descriptors are clear and vary with the differing viewpoints through the work.
A few grammatical errors pop up, but are overall easily parsed out and do not detract majorly from the flow of the story. Some intertwining of viewpoints in latter chapters take a bit of getting used to, but I mostly enjoyed the dynamic approach.
A slow burn story, it clearly has progression of the characters in a natural way - no sudden events cause a jarring shift in attitude. I felt that the characters were like people I know, their behaviours realistic and understandable (though not always agreeable!)
As a whole, it made me slightly nostalgic for similar times in my own life, though I must admit, I never studied as hard as the main characters do. I eagerly await any further updates and feel how all good fiction should leave you - wanting to see it all that bit more.