How to write dumb boys, a struggle
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The first time Hoh Saering saw Shum Deil, he witnessed a one on four fight.That night, Shum Deil got taken away by the police. Later, the academic tyrant transferred schools, leaving behind District II.
The first time they actually got to talk, Deil cursed at him.The two were instantly off to a good start.
The first time Sae’s heart moved, Deil confessed,I want to be with you.Sae opened his eyes and the wind scattered his fears.
One line summary: You made me dare to dream. What I want is you.
cold looking honour student x rebellious geniusor to put it another waycrazy but dedicated flirt x short tempered sweet teaser
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Author notes: A daily life novel. The characters will grow up slowly throughout the story.Real slow burn. Not much drama, nor angst (?) *runs away*
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- little bunny crawling
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
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- 15,927
Chapters(54 total)
- Anniversary + updateMay 21, 2024
- AnnouncementMar 23, 2023
- June 20, Monday– Summer break (Chapter .42)Mar 20, 2023
- May 14, Saturday– Decidedly so (Chapter .41)Mar 15, 2023
- April 26, Tuesday– Fanchant (Chapter .40)Mar 10, 2023
- April 23, Saturday– Don’t let her find out about that (Chapter .39)Mar 5, 2023
- April 21, Thursday– Game day (Chapter .38)Feb 25, 2023
- April 19, Tuesday– Bang (Chapter .37)Feb 20, 2023
- April 18, Monday– The impulse made his body go cold (Chapter .36 part 2)Feb 15, 2023
- April 18, Monday– The impulse made his body go cold (Chapter .36 part 1)Feb 10, 2023
- April 14, Thursday– Did you roll around in a pool of sausages? (Chapter .35)Feb 5, 2023
- April 8, Friday– Secret (Chapter .34)Jan 30, 2023
- March 21, Monday– He got promoted from ex-academic paper peddler to dog whisperer (Chapter .33)Jan 25, 2023
- March 19, Saturday– Track practice (Chapter .32 part 2)Jan 20, 2023
- March 19, Saturday– Track practice (Chapter .32 part 1)Jan 15, 2023
- March 5, Saturday– Run (Chapter .31)Jan 10, 2023
- March 3, Thursday– Do you want to play? (Chapter .30)Jan 5, 2023
- February 16 Wednesday– Join the old ladies at the public square (Chapter .29)Dec 30, 2022
- February 14, Monday– Easy chatter (Chapter .28)Dec 25, 2022
- February 14, Monday– I called him (Chapter .27)Dec 20, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- HungryboarRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I enjoyed reading this fiction. The characters all meshed well, with growth and realistic interactions. The slightly sparse style allowed for imagination to fill the space - the old adage of 'less is more' being respected in the best way. That's not to say you're left guessing, as the descriptors are clear and vary with the differing viewpoints through the work.
A few grammatical errors pop up, but are overall easily parsed out and do not detract majorly from the flow of the story. Some intertwining of viewpoints in latter chapters take a bit of getting used to, but I mostly enjoyed the dynamic approach.
A slow burn story, it clearly has progression of the characters in a natural way - no sudden events cause a jarring shift in attitude. I felt that the characters were like people I know, their behaviours realistic and understandable (though not always agreeable!)
As a whole, it made me slightly nostalgic for similar times in my own life, though I must admit, I never studied as hard as the main characters do. I eagerly await any further updates and feel how all good fiction should leave you - wanting to see it all that bit more.