How a Carpenter became the strongest melee fighter of the New World
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After taking a short 5000 year nap a god aweakens and finds that humanity had prospered since the dark ages, without him to pourpusly fuel magic in to the world, mithical beasts disapeard and became legends, Witches no longer had powers but stil got burned at the stake.
it took him a fraction of a second to analyze all databases and history recorded up to this moment, every bit of information was processed in his mind.
He yawned as he found the current world to boring for his liking.
And thus began the New Era Of Magic
The story follows a bored Carpenter from NYC
ENGLISH IS MY 4RTH LANGUAGE.
so dont expect flawless grammar or fancy vocabulary.
i mostly write this things as my hobby and to improve my english skills.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- OnanMaster
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- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 45
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- 5,943
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- DNejuRoyal Road★★★ 2.5This is my first review, so before anything else let me apologize if the review aren't really good at all.
The let's start with the story. Read a few similar story so far, be it from royalroad, web novel or light novel. It's the kind of story that can turn good with a slight innovative thinking. So do hope the author can find that uniqueness and make it into a great story.
As for the writting itself, I do want the writter to be more careful with those upper and lower case. It's strangely annoying looking at a letter that should be using upper case rather than lower case, vice versa. Then there's the comma and fullstop. The writer should pay more attention to when to use comma and when the paragraph needed to be ended with a full stop rather than continue it woth a comma. Also try to play around with the sentences so it can sound better.
Over all, I do hope you continue to update new chapter, while fixing those little problem.