Hero's Resort
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The story takes place in the generic setting of heroes, demons, monsters, magic, advanced lost civilizations, and all the between. Except, what we're actually focusing on, is the 'normal' life of a hot spring owner. Ch 4 100% done proofread 50%(Being dyslexic expect some, hiccups down the road.)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Sereo
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 2,666
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Kurama97Royal Road★★★★ 4.0I love this author for their work on Fanfic and I'm glad to see that it's continued here. I recommend you look up summoned there but anyway the review.
Style: The author's style can be a bit confusing at times with the parentheses but I've gotten used to that from his other work.
Story: This guy writes some good stuff and it's the same here. The only thing that threw me was the beginning with the two ladies. In my opinion get rid of that and find something else to set the scene. It was good but you went into alot of detail about two characters readers just don't care about. Other than that good job this reminds me of one of my favorite anime. I can't really give you too good of a score there because there's not enough out yet.
Grammar: This is why you don't have 5 stars to be honest. You need an editor my guy. You do good work and the story flows but occassionally parts are cut out or just plain make no sense with the wording all rearranged and it breaks the immerssion as my brain just short circuits and has to reread it like 5 times before just moving on. Get an editor my guy. Hell I'll even do it if I get early access to chapters!
Characters: Now this! This is where you shine my friend! I absolutely love your characters. They're witty but not icons of social perfection. In your other story is mainly where I'm taking this from but you did damn good here as well (except for the noble ladies). I don't know how you do it but they just feel alive to me and it just feels amazing to experience. They feel like people that are living their lives. And that's amazing to me.
Overall a pretty good story so far. I'll admit I let my love for his other story influence me here but meh. The only problem I have is the grammar and that beginning bit.
Actually now that I think about it the grammar wasn't as bad in this one so good job on improving yourself buddy. I still volunteer to edit in exchange for early chapters.
Thanks for all the laughs though I'll keep an eye on you.